Reviews for Tables Turned by Chie

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Seluna Maru (Chapter 13) - Wed 15 Jul 2020

Honestly the story is actually starting to drone on. I find myself barely reading it and basically skipping through. It's a good story but instead of taking up momentum it feel stationary and nothing exciting is happening. For example Kagome's dress was a hyped up I expected people to pause when they saw her. Instead it sounded like Ayame had the best fit. Sesshomaru seems  unnecessarily bored, not stoic, not cool and cold, just bored and boring. I'm not aimlessly reviewing, I have taken into account that there has been some growth and development, but not enough to grab the attention needed. It just seems a little vanilla.


Seluna Maru (Chapter 9) - Sat 11 Jul 2020

Some parts of this are a little bit....... Childish is the best way I can describe it.


Seluna Maru (Chapter 6) - Fri 10 Jul 2020

Really? How can she see all this and not figure its Sesshomaru? Lmao it makes no sense


Seluna Maru (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Jul 2020

A while back I didn't give this story a chance because I read right when the assault on Sesshomaru started. I couldn't handle it. Had I read a bit further I would have realized the story is actually pretty good. I'm happy I'm giving it a second chance I'm already in chapter 3.


SHORTFRY (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Mar 2020

Whoa I am late to the party. Just read this today, and loved every moment of it! Great AU fic, refreshing to see Sess wasn't portrayed as all-mighty-and-powerful and to see him actually relying on someone else for support. Can't wait to read more of your works!


KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Thu 14 Jun 2018

Nice chapter. I love all the dancing around. I think my heroes, Rin and Shippou, are going to get them together for sure! Izayoi has sharp eyes. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Sun 10 Jun 2018

I’m really enjoying this story. I know I haven’t been reviewing every chapter like I usually do. I like the different story and I’ve enjoyed seeing how you have worked all the characters in. Cheers!


Anonymous (Chapter 20) - Fri 31 Mar 2017

Finally finished this story. I must say that even though there were grammatical errors and whatnot that took abut away from the reading experience, this was probably one of the more interesting premises I've read. That first chapter though! Atmosphere was/is definitely your strong point because that and the last two or so chapters were the best. 

 

And be for once, someone doesn't portray Inupapa (who I kind of loathe ha) as the all-knowing dad who wants to teach his sons a lesson beyond the grave. He's rash, stubbborn and lacks faith. AKA he's not a God lol

 

This was a great story and I loved that little Rin was really his child. I really want to know what happened to the baby mama though.


ponpiri (Chapter 2) - Tue 28 Mar 2017

Wow. That firay chapter was explosive. 


Mio-sama (Chapter 20) - Mon 27 Mar 2017

Que linda historia Chie!! Atrapante desde el principio hasta el final!!:)


Knight of Disorder (Chapter 20) - Fri 28 Sep 2012

Interesting... not really my cup of tea but a decent story. Your grammar in places still messes with me, but at least your consistent.


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 20) - Fri 28 Sep 2012

Loved Loved the story! I'm so glad you recommended it to me! I love Hiten, he's my favorite character in the story haha! Great job!


Charlene (Chapter 20) - Mon 19 Mar 2012
Occasionally I am lucky enough to run across a story that is so interesting that I only quit reading when my I have eye strain from staring at the computer screen without a break. I admit I started reading this because it was a Sesshoumaru and Kagome story. It became so much more. What! no demonic or miko powers, Rin is really his daughter, Shippo didn't lose his father to the thunder brothers, InuYasha and Sesshoumaru start being a family. I could name the other differences but instead I just want to compliment you on a job well done. This is a story that could easily be a novel well read even without one knowing anything about anime. A very interesting work of art.

Nemo (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Feb 2012

Great story!


Nekorinki (Chapter 20) - Wed 04 Jan 2012

Well that was one enjoyable read! :'3

Don't mind people correcting you about the usage of words like "recognise", "agonise" and whatsoever for I doubt that the Americans are taught in school enough about the differences between their English and the British one. There were some minor writing mistakes though which I think everybody makes sometimes, so it would not have been bad to have it betaed (programs can't detect everything!). I remember one of them particularly, because I couldn't figure out for a while what the word was that seemed to be missing - it was about the shard which pierced Kagome's side (?), but it read as sharp, so I tried to guess just what sharp thing was piercing her XDDD fragment? piece? shard? I was puzzled @.@

Anyways, great story, you've got nice writing skills! I'm quite jealous :DD And who knows, maybe I'll even do some smexy fanart out of this :3 <3


Dehlia (Chapter 11) - Fri 12 Aug 2011

I just wanted to let you know that in Chapter 11, in the two paragraphs at the end of the gala, you called Mr. Thornwell (sp?) Mr. Rochester. Wasn't that one of the douches who tried to make Kagome look stupid. Just thought you ought to know.

Anyway, this story's amazing! I love it. ^^ You're an amazing writer. You should pursue it for real.


silvertigress (Chapter 20) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

All I can Say is freaking awsome story! Just finished reading it:)


Edina (Chapter 18) - Mon 06 Dec 2010

“Besides, he might be the only one to match Renkotsu’s skill, like it or not, we neediteHHHHHHHHHHjhihFo Hiten's ..." huh???

otherwise, a brilliant story!!!!!


Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 20) - Mon 06 Dec 2010

I must bow to your brilliance. Then promptly do the homework I have neglected to complete in order to finish your lovely tale.  =P

 

~~Mizuko~~


Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 4) - Sun 05 Dec 2010
I love your work.... Anyway yet another great story I'm enjoying but the irony of this line reminded me so of something Shakespeare world write in one of his Tragedies:
"Katsuo recognised an honourable man when he saw one." ("Recognised" is spelt with a "z" though.)
I about died! lol Wondrous!
Have a great week!
~~Mizuko~~

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