Well that was one enjoyable read! :'3
Don't mind people correcting you about the usage of words like "recognise", "agonise" and whatsoever for I doubt that the Americans are taught in school enough about the differences between their English and the British one. There were some minor writing mistakes though which I think everybody makes sometimes, so it would not have been bad to have it betaed (programs can't detect everything!). I remember one of them particularly, because I couldn't figure out for a while what the word was that seemed to be missing - it was about the shard which pierced Kagome's side (?), but it read as sharp, so I tried to guess just what sharp thing was piercing her XDDD fragment? piece? shard? I was puzzled @.@
Anyways, great story, you've got nice writing skills! I'm quite jealous :DD And who knows, maybe I'll even do some smexy fanart out of this :3 <3
(Chapter 11) - Fri 12 Aug 2011
I just wanted to let you know that in Chapter 11, in the two paragraphs at the end of the gala, you called Mr. Thornwell (sp?) Mr. Rochester. Wasn't that one of the douches who tried to make Kagome look stupid. Just thought you ought to know.
Anyway, this story's amazing! I love it. ^^ You're an amazing writer. You should pursue it for real.
silvertigress (Chapter 20) - Sun 27 Mar 2011
All I can Say is freaking awsome story! Just finished reading it:)
Edina (Chapter 18) - Mon 06 Dec 2010
“Besides, he might be the only one to match Renkotsu’s skill, like it or not, we neediteHHHHHHHHHHjhihFo Hiten's ..." huh???
otherwise, a brilliant story!!!!!
I must bow to your brilliance. Then promptly do the homework I have neglected to complete in order to finish your lovely tale. =P
I love your work.... Anyway yet another great story I'm enjoying but the irony of this line reminded me so of something Shakespeare world write in one of his Tragedies:
"Katsuo recognised an honourable man when he saw one." ("Recognised" is spelt with a "z" though.)
I about died! lol Wondrous!
Have a great week!
(Chapter 20) - Sat 04 Dec 2010
Well done and great ending! ^_^
What a lovely ending to an amazing story! The trials and hardships of this story kept me so thoroughly entertained that at times I had to forced myself to quit reading. You truly are a wonderful and talented writer, as the story was proof of such creativity. I am sad it is over but I'm happy for the ending! Yay! :) I can't wait to see more of your work if you plan on any more stories. Again thank you for sharing your amazing story with everyone on Dokuga!
(Chapter 20) - Fri 03 Dec 2010
It's been a great ride and I was so happy with how the story ended. I loved it and I will be reading it again soon..
(Chapter 20) - Fri 03 Dec 2010
Your little goodbye note made cry a little, I guess hehe. I feel...I don't know. I've been reading since a Single Spark, waiting, bursting in joy with every new chapter you posted, reviewing (most of the time hehe)....and now its over.
I leave this fanfiction with a deep sense of satisfaction, and I congratulate you as a fellow writer for having finished this story. I have to manage that yet hahaha. And as a reader, thank you. Thank you for such a wonderful story. I'll miss seeing the update messages in my inbox (: Let me tell you, this was as good as reading an excellent book. If it were a printed version, I would no doubtedly be smiling while turning the last white page and then the cover.
Congratulations Chie! And thanks a lot!!! :D
I love you!!! I love the ending and I love this story. It's been one of the first stories I bookmarked and it's been priviledge to read it. Thank you!!!
tiana (Chapter 19) - Thu 18 Nov 2010
omg im lovin thiz story
I loved how Sesshoumaru proposed to Kagome. That was him to the point! lol. I'm glad Naraku finally got what was coming to him. I've never been a fan of Hiten but he has become my second favrorite character because of your story! I hope he at least gets a little action in the final chapter. lol Amazing story and can't read the final part! :)
Oh..I've been consistently managing to forget this in every. Single. Review.
I heart your characterisation of Hiten. Never was a badass made so b-a-d-a-s-s in any work of Inuyasha fandom! Or at least none that combined complete nerdiness with asskicking in equal dollops. You really should reward him with a girlfriend in the epilogue. Or at least sex. XD
That was quick! Both the update date and the dealing with Naraku.
The Naraku part left me quite satisfied, so no complaints there. Izayoi's reaction when she welcomes Sess back into the family was awesomely heartwarming too. But I wish you'd spent more time on Inupapa, his guilt, anger, hurt and everything. it just seemed a little too..less, considering what he put Sess through...I mean, he effectively took away his son's reputation, family, name and several precious years of youth. Angsting over that definitely needed more space. I hope you elaborate more on Inupapa and Sess's residual feelings regarding the whole mess and each other in the epilogue!
Love the proposal. Very me. XD I'm not much for wuffy proposals with candles and wine and roses and blah blah blah...okay...I detest them. Especially detest the roses. And your proposal was a perfect Sess proposal! Somehting I could read without cringing and not even once have the following thought cross my mind:
"Dear Eros, if I was in that girl's shoes, I'd never have been able to look the guy in the eyeball ever again! Now, should I flee or grin like a supremely embarrassed Cheshire Cat or flee? Oh....more sap....forget it, let's do them all."
I did wish for more Sess-Kag moments, though. But I realose that this chapter was basically focusing on cleaning up the mystery and letting Sess return home. So...expecting loads and loads of unabashed SessKag in the epilogue!!! ^.^
(Chapter 18) - Fri 29 Oct 2010
Have I reviewed this chap yet? I'm not sure... :/
All I know is that I can't wait!!!! :D
I REALLY wanna see how the whole company reacts with Sesshoumaru's grand entrance! ^^
Keep up the great work and PLEASE update sooon!
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