That was a short chappie but it was sufficient in answering all my questions. And I know I ask alot of questions... hope ur ready for some more *evil grin*... how does Kagome's mother know Mukoutsu? How does Kagome find out she's a phoenix angel? (I think that was the last one... wait, just kidding). Also, could you make ur chappies longer? Keep up the good work and update soon. :P
kagi-chan (Chapter 12) - Tue 10 Mar 2009
| Yep! I bought a new one. I like this one better than my last one!
I like the chapter, and Sesshoumaru was so cute.
Hope you write more soon!
This short chappie will suffice for now... but I expect a longer chappie to appease this loyal fic reader's curiosity. I can't wait for the next chappie... hopefully some of my questions will be answered. I'll stop my rapid fire of questions for now... I'll give you a break this one time. *Evin grin* but be ready for a truck load of questions... I've got a few hundred lined up and ready to go. Update soon and keep up the good work :P
| love it it was a sweet ending can't wait for the next chapter....xD
| love it it was a sweet ending can't wait for the next chapter....xD
Maddie (Chapter 11) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
great job PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!
WhiteRose-Kurama (Chapter 11) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
Ok... so you've answered some of my questions. But now I have even more to ask you. Did her master keep her locked up because he somehow found out that she was a phoenix angel? You still need to do a back story on Kagome's past to appease this loyal fic reader. How did she come into possession of the Shikon no Tama? Was she born with it? And how dare you end it where you did... *evil glare* It was getting good and you just had to end it there T.T ... I hope you do an extra long update to answer all of my questions. Also, could you do a drawing of what Kagome looks like as a phoenix angel? Keep up the good work and update sooon. :P
Kagi-chan (Chapter 11) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
| Hey!
I was so happy that I didn't miss any of your updates. My keyboard and mouse died so I have to wait to buy a new one.
Man wireless sucks! Blue tooth..bleh!...heh, so I am currenty using my bro's lap top to check my messages and thought to look if you had posted a new chapter.
So yay.
I love the chapter and I do love the idea of Kags being a pheonix-angel.
Woah, Kouga is being such a jerk off bastard..heh, love it! and I wonder what he wants Kags for if he doesn't care about her like that, probably for her power and her lookss or for the Shikon, eh?
Well Update and if I don't review when you next update don't worry it's probably because I couldn't get to a computer being that my stupid keyboard and mouse decided that they don't like me any more...
Phoenix Angel? Now I want the back story to how Kagome ended up her master... I wonder what everyone is going to say when she wakes up. I look forward to what's in store for everyone. What will Sess do? Keep up the good work :P
Maddie (Chapter 10) - Fri 30 Jan 2009
I really hate you for stopping it THERE why why why!!!??? update sooooooooooooooon
| Good as always.
So Kags is a pheonix, angel demon.
That's cool.
I can;t wait for your next chapter.
Crimson Rose (Chapter 9) - Mon 19 Jan 2009
Love it! Perfect place to end the chapter hun. There are a couple typos not that much. Keep'um comingQ
Your New Beta,
Crimson Rose
| This is a really good chapter. Is she even human? or a type of demon? or something. I can't wait till your next chapter. Oh and I like the new pen name.
Two Hearts (Chapter 9) - Mon 19 Jan 2009
| i like this! keep writing i need to know what happens!
How is it that Kagome came into the possession of the Shikon? How did her master know she had it? What will Kagura tell Sess when he finds out Kagome just fainted? In her flashback, did the flames that sprang from her body come from the Shikon trying to protect Kagome? Also, I thought of a song that might fit with this flashback scene... "Lies" by Evanscence or even "Bring Me to Life" by Evanscence. Keep up the good work and update soon!
I am honored that you want me to be your muse. You are the first person to give me such an honor. I was a little sad that the chappie was so short considering that it was just getting really good too. I want to know what Kagome will say about the scars. I look forward to your updates. Also, it's the chappies you write that inspire me to come up with songs to match the scene :P
| Ah what happened? I can't till you continue.
Oh...don't worry as long as I am on the computer and I see that you have updated, I'll leave you a review. If not than I'll leave one for each chapter that I missed. Okay.
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