Oh wow, what a moving chapter. I think every reviewer's got the same idea, that a trip to the past with a digital camera is in order. Video, sound, still life...aren't those the things Sesshoumaru's missing? What better way to give him hope than to show up with that in hand? Press a button, and all of his good memories resurface. Anyway, this scene was touching and tender. Loved it.
Zoku (Chapter 4) - Thu 11 Dec 2008
Something like a video camera?
I enjoyed the first 4 chapters. Looking forward to more.
Ta for the enjoyable read!
~Zoku~
0o0o0o perhaps Kags could take back a cam-corder. and take pictures and images of little Rin for him, after all for her, Rin's still alive! i love this story btw. i cant wait for your next update! - r0o
| Wow, so heartwrenching sadness in Sesshoumaru. I truly feel for him. And now, to know there is a means to go back and not be allowed to do so must be so hard to take. From a mighty warrior to a sad and haunted writer, poor Sesshoumaru. No one ever believed he could feel such emotion. I hope he gives Kagome a chance to ease the burden of memories from the past. It would be wonderful if she could take a picture for him when he is ready to handle seeing his little girl without such regret. JEN
You've captured the sadness often associated with this season perfectly. It's as wistful as it is melancholy. Your words sparkle. Amazing stuff.
Lady Scheherazadea (Chapter 2) - Mon 08 Dec 2008
OMG! This is so good! I can't wait for your next update!
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