Oooohhhh!!! That was so sad and happy at the same time. but I find myself wanting more fluff there at the end. but it was good.
Poignant.
The deep love Kagome and Sesshoumaru have for each other is really touching and bittersweet. And you described the lake and emotions surrounding it amazingly.
Great story.
Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Tue 20 Jul 2010
aaaaaww!!!! that was ssssoooo sweet and at the same time ssssooo sad. i was very happy when rin had a second chance to stay with sesshomaru. great strory, one of the best ones i have ever read :)
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Oh Monti you had me crying by the last chapter. What a wonderful story.
LadySafire
Akumi (Chapter 3) - Fri 23 Jan 2009
| My god! I'm sobbing! I know she's not dead...by omg...that was amazing. So well written..I could feel his horror, his anguish. *sniffs* Omg...I love you. haha *runs off to read*
| LOVE IT! I didn't know what to expect for the end but it was AWESOME!
Shade (Chapter 7) - Thu 15 Jan 2009
This was really good, if a tad bit short. I really enjoyed reading it, though. =3
I am honored that you dedicated this chappie to me. It was short and sweet and it explained all the questions that I had pertaining to Rin. I'm sad that you won't be doing a sequel but I look forward to any future stories you come up with. Thanks again.
That was short and sweet. But I wish you could have made the story longer. Would you consider making a sequel? It'd be sad if you just left it as is. I mean... I want more... could you please tell me what happened to Rin and what becomes of Kagome's home? I hope you will allow a fic reader's request. I enjoy your work of art. :P
This has been one of the best fics I've read. It's short and sweet and kind of sad. I love the idea of how Kagome would sacrifice her own body to be able to live longer. It's also kind of sad how Sess is such a blockhead, he could have met her just one last time. Also, I wonder what Sess's reaction will be when he finds out about Kagome. Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P
Wow! this is amazing i can't wait for the next chapter.
Megan (Chapter 4) - Thu 18 Dec 2008
| Hey Lady! This story is really great. It makes me sad sad sad that stupid Sesshoumaru didn't visit when he was supposed to. And I am very happy that Kagome is so selfless. It seems true to her character. Keep going please!
they will come back, right? Rin will tell them that it was Kagome that had save her from her old age so they could all be together again? That she is still alive at the bottom of the lake waiting? Please tell me that it will happen. That sesshomaru will come back and finally see Kagome, even if she still haven't the powers to have a real body yet.
it makes me so sad. I really wish that sesshomaru now know that she isn't really dead.
please, update soon!!!
this makes r0o so sad, will they ever be together? and how long will it take, poor Kagome.
not here (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Dec 2008
| ya know your good at writin'. you need to update soon, so whatcha waiten for? update, gal!
Kizzy-Lemon (Chapter 3) - Sat 06 Dec 2008
| You're such a beautiful writer, and I love this so much so far. I can't really describe it, but i think it's amazing. Please, please update soon.
| Very heart wrenching begining, its great cant wait to read more. Good job....
thats about the saddest thing i think i've seen in a while i cant wait to see more, update soon!
Nyuka (Chapter 1) - Wed 03 Dec 2008
| I got a lump in my throut that was heart renching. Ya just know someing bad is going to happen to Kagome and Sesshy is just going to blame him self (serves him right...lol JK)...Just a guess but is Kagome going to become imortal some how and then Sesshy will have to win her back?...I do think he would desurve that but hay it could just be me.....XP........Nyuka
kedala (Chapter 1) - Mon 01 Dec 2008
| A beautifully sad beginning. Wonderful writing. I had to favorite!!
Can't wait to read more.
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