| OH GOD!!! I LOVE YOU, MISS K!!!! This line: "Has Kagome explained to you how I treat the one that I have?" he asked.: had me cracking up SO much. I was literally slapping the desk top with laughter and getting very strange looks. :) Thank SO much for updating this. I most definitely look forward to more. Yes, more. You've only whetted my appetite. And I loved Souta's part in this chapter, along with Sesshoumaru's ideas on Kagome's family. They ARE kinda strange, after all.
autumngold (Chapter 5) - Mon 14 Sep 2009
| Thank you for the update to your story. I'm so glad that Sesshoumaru went to Kagome's time to ask for her hand in marriage. Now he needs to learn to be a little bit nicer to Kagome. Sure she is used to Inuyasha, but doesn't she deserve something better with the man she mates? This is such a great story! I can't wait for more!
LC Rose (Chapter 4) - Thu 10 Sep 2009
| LC DEMANDS MORE!! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! I keep coming back and reading what's already been posted over and over again and I DESIRE to have more chapters to pour over, Miss K. Please? *makes puppy dog eyes*
| That was totally awesome and HOT lol and yet weird with the whole getting checked i feel embarrassed for kagome lol i hope u update soon ill keep an eye out for ur next chapter
headalphafemale (Chapter 4) - Wed 24 Jun 2009
| I loved this story. Chapters 1,2, and 3 are great. The problem with Chapter 4 is the story has stopped. Sessy is very direct which is how he seems to be, and Kagome is patient and kind as she should be. Good job. I just hope Inuyasha isn't going to end up alone or dead, this is always a disappointment. After all why does Sessy carry around that dead raising sword and why is Kykeo still dead. If Inuyasha can't have Kagome, why not give him back his old girl friend? But its your story so do as you please. Thanks.
| Oh, yeah. This is simply awesome. I love it.
| I love this, and I think she comes from an alternate universe also. Because, while we have legends about demons and whatnot, it's not a part of "history-history". Plus, it would mean everyone on "Inuyasha", and other fairy tales, is not doomed.
| This is excellent, and I love it!
taixi (Chapter 4) - Sun 31 May 2009
I notice you've started another story (which I just reviewed as well). That's all well and good - but hopefully you're not abandoning this one; it's quite funny! (Just a reminder in the hopes you won't leave us hanging with this one)
well hells bells, i think i've found another reason to be addicited to your work, Toccata wasn't enought o make r0o crazy now you have this. seems i will forever be begging you for more. o well i adore tis and can't wait to see more of it - r0o
MLMonty (Chapter 4) - Thu 14 May 2009
That was, wow, that was halarious. I loved it.
ZOMG, hiatus or not, you haven't lost the touch!! That was hilarious... absolutely freakin' hilarious. "Gynecological exam," indeed. The capper on this chapter, though, was the last line: "No chance in hell. Sorry." I had to try SOOOO hard to laugh quietly, I almost choked to death. It was worth every gasp, however. Honest. Again, I am so VERY glad you're still writing. Totally awesome stuff... keep it up, preferably just a tad sooner than the last time, 'k? *snicker* ;) ~~me~~
I really like this one and am glad your going to continue with it. I love the sense of humor in your writing.
It's been so long since I read this story, but I'm very glad you're back to write it. The awkwardness is absolutely wonderful. Welcome back!
LC Rose (Chapter 4) - Mon 11 May 2009
| So suave. So debonair. So perfect. LOL! This was a fine addition to an already awesome story. And Sesshoumaru is being so...romantic. I'm lovin' it! Thanks for updating.
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