Im sad its over, iwant to know more, but very well done. You imagery is amazing. Such a beautiful talent. I loved it!
Teensie Sama (Chapter 1) - Mon 24 Nov 2008
I thought the intricy of your words were beautiful. The descriptions, the way you captured their personnas and vivid image of what was happening. Beautiful!!! Love it lots! Thanks for sharing!
TS
twiknham (Chapter 1) - Sun 23 Nov 2008
Rikayu,
You might not be impressed with this story, but I thought it was very entertaining. It left me wondering quite a bit about the holes that were not filled in (InuYasha's death, why Sess was with Kagome several months ago, etc....) but the emotion was very believable and was not overdone. If you write more, I'm sure I will read it, but it was complete on its own.
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