Writing fics from Sesshomaru's perspective is difficult and rare to find. You do it so well. I love his contemplation and Kagome's bombastic entry. Single minded focus is.. hot clearly.
On a second thought, I need to commend your potrayal of Kagome. No simpering miss nor a crying wreck. you've made her reasonably formidable which is intoxicating for the likes of Sesshomaru here. try dodge that demon lord. urgh, you're a phenomenal writer and I look forward to reading everything you write.
Amai (Chapter 23) - Wed 29 Nov 2023
Their interaction of tip toeing made me smile. a lot.
Ahhh how they dance around each other no matter the circumstances, the time, the theme.
Loved the chapter so cool...
Dun dun dun!!!
Lorena (Chapter 22) - Sun 05 Nov 2023
I had to binge read this! What a pleasure to run into this today, and a bummer I'm not done reading it since this means I will have to wait for more!
Great chapter and Kagome vindicated. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Ah ha finally we get a reveal..... Man what a fight and Kagome was going to kick a birds ass ten times worse than before.... She'll show Sesshomaru.
Finally! Sesshomaru needs to get it together! Update soon!!!
Oh no! I don't believe Yakeru.
Ahhhhhhh!!! I can't want for more!!!!
Oh boy! Can't wait to find out what caused this!
Oooooo Sesshomaru done screwed up!
Oh I didn't expect the ending wow what a show.... I wonder what Kagome saw or over heard to defend the shiro? What did the general do or say that got him caught in the act.... Update soon loved the chapter....
Please update soon
I love it!!!!! Update soon!!!
That was a really interesting chapter. I enjoyed the interplay during the meeting with the generals. Very interesting.
I don't trust the fire bird either giving false statements like that can get a yokai or better yet a miko killed.
Sarah (Chapter 19) - Mon 21 Aug 2023
This is so good! I really enjoy reading this. I look forward to see what else happens.
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