this is a great story that i read before and i am happy that i got to read it again i love and like it a lot your a very good and great author who wrote this really great and wonderful good story.
I'm so happy it was finally updated, it's been on my mind for quite a while now. I love how she's Taisho's second daughter. And I especially love how Sesshoumaru is not allowed to interact with her. Makes him frustrated. He deserves it, though. Willing to kill a defenseless child. For shame. Until he realizes and pays for his mistake he doesn't deserve her company in any form :3 I liked this chapter, and again, can't wait for the next.
Nyuka (Chapter 9) - Thu 30 Apr 2009
Man I hope that Midoriko for some strange twist of fate survives. I always thought her fate unfair to be honest. Ya know I may not really like Kagura but I always felt sorry for her....perhaps the guy can save her I can only hope really....I would love to find out...XD....Nyuka
stars (Chapter 9) - Tue 28 Apr 2009
| please updata
| I love your story!!!! It has me enraptured by the plot. I can't wait for you to update the next chapter. Sesshomaru is not going to really let the demons eat babby Kagome, is he???? Please nooooo! And another thing this is going to be a Sess x Kag fanfic right? I know that Sesshomaru and Kagome are indecisive right now but they realise their feelings in the story later right???? Oh I want to know!!!!!!!! Please update the next chapter soon?!?!??!?!??!?!?!
| I love it. I didnt expect the whole kagome changing into a baby thing either. Well JaNe
Anonymous (Chapter 5) - Fri 05 Dec 2008
I really like this story a really interest ing one can't wait for the next chapter and to see what happens next ^_^
hmmm... Indeed, you're a little wobbly on your writer's figurative legs, but you show a vast potential, and the plot line seems fascinating... you have my attention, that's for sure.
Just so you know, a Hakama is the equivalent of the pant, the Gi being the shirt of the japanese outfit. It's a little confusing to see it used the other way around XD
Dewa mata
Nyuka (Chapter 4) - Sun 30 Nov 2008
| Oh My Gosh...I LOVE THIS FIC....its so exsiting....I'm starting to think their was more then just simple comradeship between the future Sesshoumaru and Kagome...I hope Kagome can change Midoriko's fate...that way the jewel disappear....and maybe Kagome can stay with the younger Sesshoumaru...and maybe change Inu no tashio's fate as well...then Inuyasha would have a real father and would have such a horrible child hood....yaa....that would be nice I think...XD..........................Nyuka
nykitty (Chapter 3) - Tue 25 Nov 2008
| I love your story! The plot it amazing. It is not the same ol' redundant plot. It has many twists and is simply amazing although kagome going even futher in the past has been done before this story is completely different and i wouldn't even put it in the same catergory as those stories. Great work! I could not tell you were not a native speaker. I know learning another language is hard. I am learning Spanish, so I applaud your talent and dedication. You should feel very proud because you write better then most native speakers. Can not wait for your next chapter. Keep up the good work.
mangadreams (Chapter 3) - Tue 25 Nov 2008
Love the story!!! can hardly wait to see what happens:)
mangadreams (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Nov 2008
Plot looks really interesting so far, Very much enjoyed reading your first chapter!!!
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