Such a lovely update. All the descriptions of the breads and sweets are yummy. I love how excited she is about all the choices. I was hoping that he had saved her a piece. I can hardly wait to read more of this story. 
| Hi there!    I recently came back to reading fanfics after probably more than a decade, and fiiiinally joined Dokuga. This was the first fic that I decided to read, and it's off to a delicious start. c: Sesshoumaru as a baker is just...oooh. A nice image. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes, and in the meantime, I'm going to check out your other stuff!     
 
Mecca (Chapter 4) - Sat 12 Jun 2021 | This is delightful! Can't wait to see how it all unfolds! I'd like to give a prompt! "insatiable" <3    
 | Ooh! The plot thickens.  I wonder what will happen now?  Will he continue to be friendly or will he try to push her away from his bakery?      
 | I'm enjoying this story so much!  Sesshomaru the baker is a win for me any day.  Poor Kagome though, even I would struggle with the choices if he explained it that way.   Prompts: Yellow and Milk (2 separate words you can use however you want)    
 | Again, like I said before, love love love your description of the scene.  I can picture myself in the bakery!  What will Kagome choose?  I'd go with cake myself but that's cause I have a sweet tooth.      
 | Very interesting story premise.  I can't wait to see where you take this.  I'm loving your description of the setting by the way: the way you set up the intro to the story in this chapter was well done.      
 | It is a nice story. Can't wait for more. Plus, Fuafua-sama's POV every forth chapter os GREAT!    
 | Absolutely! It's nice to get his POV too. Ahhh...an only for youkai place. The plot thickens.     
 
Neelixonee (Chapter 4) - Sat 05 Jun 2021 | I love when writers give out of the ordinary jobs to Sesshoumaru! I can't wait to read the development.   Prompt: wheedle    
 | Squee! Two chapters in one night! My fluff bunny is very happy!     
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