steamy and sexy is all i have to say. keep it up. i like stories like this. caio
NIghtmare? funny it sounds like fun to me!
Amy (Chapter 4) - Fri 25 Jun 2010
THANK YOU FOR A STORY THAT IS FUNNY,EROTIC,AND DEVILISH!
Hot, hot, hot! ;) You had quite a few grammatical errors, but those could easily be fixed. :) You did a great job on the lemons and all of the built-up sexual tension. This story was quite the piece of work, if I do say so myself. ;)
- Tiffany0314
katie (Chapter 4) - Sat 16 May 2009
| wow that was very good keep going
Dlat (Chapter 3) - Mon 07 Jul 2008
| Wonderful plotline! Although, I think you might want to either proofread your works or invest in a beta, because you have some places where the grammer doesn't flow with the rest of the story, which makes it kinda confusing.
winggoddess916 (Chapter 4) - Thu 29 May 2008
| that was kinky! i loved it!!!
manda (Chapter 4) - Mon 26 May 2008
| i just love this story
Angel (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 May 2008
| wow i love this lol kagome was a little off but i loved her, to bad she's not really like that in the show. 10/5 LOL
G1RLLY (Chapter 1) - Fri 09 May 2008
| Aha, Very hot, very cute. Did I mention very hot? :P, Well, I read your other story, "Fire and Desire", both just as sinfully good! I'm currently read your "Make Up Your Mind!" fic on adultfanfiction.net , and I can't wait till you update:) Keep up the greeeeat work!!
sugar0o (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 May 2008
| okay so i allied to be a member and haven't gotten my email yet... other wise i'd be leaving it from there, this was a fantastic story and i love hoe all this played out, i would really love to see this in real life, it was amusing. ^_^ lovely job!
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