It was great. Nice work. Could've done a bit better with InuYasha's character. A lot of time was taken on the first half showing kagome's and InuYasha's failed marriage which was good as it slowly took but the switch to sesshomaru felt more so abrupt and more time could've been given to them. What I loved most was the Japanese idioms in the beginning of each arc. Overall.. A great read.. Thank you.. 

This feels more complete unlike some of your other one shots. I'm guessing they may have been earlier works. I know how writing takes practice!

Great job with this.