I just lost my shit over "Oh look a MAN." And I can't stop laughing and snorting. 

Spell check and/or a beta would really help. You repeatedly start a sentence with "Am", have the wrong word choice, and there are other errors where I have I have to figure out what you are trying to say. I think you have really good ideas, but the writing needs more editing work. 

Lol that was a fun oneshot! I bet they were stuck in the elevator for a while. ;D

I like the way you bring the coversation with inuyasha...it's really funny and smart. I hope this not just one night standing or one shot. Make it longer not pwp please. Your writing really great.

Hell yes!  

Elevator go up????