Oh my, he is going to be a handful. This was a very interesting chapter. Repression is playing a losing hand and his grip is starting to unravel. Thanks for updating. I love this story. 
| So, I'm afraid I have a bone to pick.   I noticed you chose to drop an "F-Bomb" in your story, and I'm afraid I have to take issue with that. You see, you elected to rate your story M for mature.  So, as a mature individual, I expect a certain considerations in regards to that rating. Though I am not a minor, I am dating a 17 y/o (I'm in a state where that's legal, so don't worry).  And as such, I am constantly surrounded by teenagers.  And let me tell you; these kids cuss up a storm.  F-bombs...C-words.. and don't get me started on the graphic sexual acts they discuss and take parts in. My point is, these teenagers expect a certain amount of cursing in their fanfiction, and I am afraid you have fallen short.  If you wish to keep your M rating, I only ask that you achieve the minimum quota of 4 "F-Bombs" per chapter.  Or, as an exchange, at least 2, and your characters must progress to more sexually explicit behavior.  You are the artist, I shall let you decide. If you fail to meet your quota, I must insist that you lower your rating to a T.  Mature individuals demand mature content, and teasing us without delivering is unacceptable. You are obviously very talented, and I know you will do the right thing.  I look forward to reading your filth.  Thank You.    
 
Tilayha (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Jan 2020 | Ohhh like this chapter very very much. Sesshoumaru crying, fantasy Kago meeting real Kago, and a lazy sesshoumaru. Wonderful : )    
 
susie (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Jan 2020 | Brilliant!  Inspired!   Ok.  There is just so much to like about this.  I'm getting more and more into this fic, and i cannot wait to see what happens next! Thanks so much for writing!    
 
Sarah (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Jan 2020 | This is awesome. I love this idea. Yea i remember watch the tern titan show on this. It was one of my favorites with raven. But i have to say i really love what you have done here. So much fun to read. I am really enjoying it. I bet its ao much fun to play with.    
 
Mecca (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Jan 2020 | Love the concept that Sesshomaru has a fantasy version of Kagome locked within his psyche xD I hope Kagome can escape soon so she can ask the real Sess what in tarnation is going on. I'm spellbound! Thank you for the update.     
 | This story still make me amazed. I never thought this kind of story. Does any movie like this in real live? Or anime maybe...its been so long i haven't seen anime again. Im not fond with anime mecca time/something like battle things. I like the old anime. Inuyasha, sailormoon, etc. They have power but still have some love story too. Ah...sorry for the rambling. But i really like this story....make it til the end please.....    
 | I sometime wonder if Sesshoumaru hides laziness by having the whole "I do what I want" attitude.  Like, sinetging isn't " worth his time" hut really he's just lazy.    
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