Oh my God this was so amazing perfect jyst perfect this had a beginning middle and end it doesn't go all over the place like a lot of stories do now a days while there was some drama which is cool it didn't last forever 20 chapters this was amazing you are awesome need a new story ASAP lol you were so quick with this one
The story is pretty good for being your first. FYI the last chapter kags is still recuperating from the birth, a
Women can have sex for at least a month aster birth, usually tthe month. The story have action, many good sex scenes and a good ending. Kudos to you.
SOOO goood! I read the whole story(all the chapters) just today. I loved the plot, the limes(foreplay), the lemons. The details in your story were amazing, you did a really good job writing this. Aside from the gramatical errors and spelling errors this story was a REALLY good read! You should be proud of this story!
this was a wonderful story to read. i passed on it a couple of times, then i decided to go ahead and read it. i'm glad i did. the chapters were short, but long and very detailed. i felt the attraction and love btwn the 2 MC in the fanffic. l loved how you wrote sesshoumaru in this story. he was still himself only better. i was glad he and kagome had their son. all that lovemaking had to produce something. i was hoping to see inuyasha at the end of the final chapter, but seeing shippou and rin was better. once again i loved this story. keep up the great writing. c'ya'
Shanika (Chapter 16) - Tue 27 Aug 2019
MORE MORE MORE MORE...... don't leave it like this. It just getting good
Toni (Chapter 16) - Mon 26 Aug 2019
I just finished the entire story. it is so great love the way you wrote this
can't wait for more chapters please update soon
cynyo75 (Chapter 16) - Sun 25 Aug 2019
I cannot wait to read the next chapter. This story capture my heart and rob my eyes, I could not put down my ipad until i finished. Please keep on writing!
| I absolutely love this story so far and their connection. And you have good imagery! Love to read the rest.
Omg this is such a great story!?!?! I hope u will update really really soon! That last chappy was way too short ????
Jasmine (Chapter 1) - Sat 24 Aug 2019
Interesting story eager to read to the end, I like the different perspective, and communication thru the well.
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