This sounds like a good story you’ve cooked up. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Interesting concept. I like the idea of the two of them sharing her. Let's see how this works out and if they can both get along (hopefully). Although I have to tell you I'm a little confused about your POV's since you seem to switch between first person and third person. I don't know if that was your intention or if those first person POV's were just thoughts. 
      
*fans myself* 
well - what a way to start! Excited for more! 
      
Please Update soon!!!! 
      
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