Reviews for Riders on the Storm by Jamie

VS (Chapter 7) - Sun 13 Jan 2019

Haha, seems like Kagome has some prejudices. Kitsune are not allowed to have a cold and indifferent expression? :P

There have been quite a few new names in this chapter...hope I will be able to remember them!

Sly Kagome. She can handle that bunch of military males quite well. Though I had to rech with all that sexism too. Can't blame Kagome for her tactics!

I'm looking forward to your next update.


VS (Chapter 6) - Sun 13 Jan 2019

I just love how Sesshoumaru is being extra stubborn! :D Even the gods can't handle him. Though Amaterasu is the best, flicking his nose! Haha, nice one!

I'm sorry for Mama Higurashi. So the "real" child had died in a car accident and the soul rider is taking his place now. That chapter cleared up some of the questions I had.

Thanks!


VS (Chapter 5) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

Boom! The moon god knows exactly what buttons he has to push! Was the story about the mark of the moon a joke, or is it really the reason why Sesshoumaru has it? Because my question would be then: why does SessMama have it to?

I'm looking forward to your next update!


VS (Chapter 4) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

Hahaha, this chapter was just too funny. Well Sesshoumaru, seems that someone is stronger than you! :P And it was only a touch with the tip of a finger! :') Jaken reactions though... :)

You know when that god mention that Sesshoumaru's soul will stay in that realm until he accepted his destiny, I was like "Oh, boy! It's over. You might as well bury the body, 'cause that stubborn dog will never agree willingly to anything!" 

Nice chapter!


VS (Chapter 3) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

So the well is sealed now. At least for everybody but those four. Does that mean now, that the story will progress in modern times?

I understand the need to explain Aya's existence. But I do feel SO sorry for Mama Higurashi...that poor women thinks that she had been raped... :( Maybe Kagome will find an appropriate punishment for her soul rider? ;) ;)

Off to the next chapter.


Nile (Chapter 4) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

Pretty cool. BTW... it's Tsukuyomi, not Tsukiyomi. 


VS (Chapter 2) - Fri 11 Jan 2019

Aaah, almost missed the second chapter!!! So Inuyasha is like that in your story? Well, then I'm glad the he was holding Kiyou's hand! ;) :P Also I loved Miroku's reaction...go Miroku go!

As you probably know I'm a big fan of Shippou and love to see him in a mother-son relationship with Kagome. So I'm super happy that he is calling her mom! :) And Rin's way of talking was just sweet!

I'm looking forward to your next update!


VS (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jan 2019

OMG I didn't know you were writing!!! A nice surprise! :)

I find your concept to be really interesting. Especially that you write in the POV of an OC. That is rather unusual and I'm looking forward to that reading experience! Well, I don't need 3 guesses to tell who that bastard is going to be! :P

Though I will probably reread the first chapter when you will update the second one. Just to be sure that I understood your idea correctly!

I'm looking forward to your next update!

P.S. Don't change your writing style! Swearing seems to suit both of your OC's quite well! ;)


Toni (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jan 2019

love your story  looking forward to many more chapters 

please keep writing it


Nallely (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Jan 2019

The plot is really interesting and I like your writing style, I'm going to continue reading your story so please keep going.


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