Please finish this!!!!! ????????????????

Awesome beginning chapter!!!  I like this intriguing and fascinating story already. 

It seems like just yesterday that I read your very first fiction 'Transcendency', here on Dokuga and can't believe it's been two years ago.  

I knew then that you were going to turn out some brilliant stories for us to read.  I love your unique creative writing style and imagination.

Most, if not all, of your stories have that unique brand of twists in each plot and portrayal of the characters that I love.

I am so looking forward to reading more updates soon.

Excellent writing and cheers!!!

Well all I can say is wow, that was good. Im so looking forward to the next chapters. 

Brilliant! What a fascinating and exciting storyline! I'm very excited for the next chapter and the story that will be told. 

I can’t wait to read more!!! This is quite interesting and I think I’m going to enjoy this one too. I‘m glad to hear you’ll be updating the others soon enoug!!:) 

I like this setting for the story...very different.  This will be an excellent story. Looking forward to updates.

Wow! This is one of the most interesting stories I have read in a long while. I enjoyed the build up and you providing some of the back stories of some of the character. I look forward to reading more of the story. It is very well written and I was just sucked into the story. You created a vivid picture with your words. I can’t wait for the next chapter.