Reviews for Shadowed Secrets by demon13o

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Dawn Peyser (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 Nov 2018

I love the way the story is going.  I do hope that Sesshoumaru can help Kogome get rid of the darkness in her sole.

Can't wait for the next chapter.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 7) - Fri 16 Nov 2018

Another awesome chapter.

I wonder, now that Kagome has released the darkness that she had been holding back, will that shadowed nemesis that put the darkness in her soul finally reveal herself?  Will she be able to correct herself in time , before she harms anyone, especially her own little one?

This is an intriguing story and I would love to read it on to a possible final 'happily ever after' conclusion.  lol  :)

Excellent writing!!!


blommie8 (Chapter 7) - Fri 16 Nov 2018

Jamie (Chapter 7) - Thu 15 Nov 2018

And so it begins... the beast knows her darkness, but can the rational side help her find the light? Will he be lost to her darkness, as well? I am absolutely enthralled by your story! So can't wait for the next chapter! 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 6) - Wed 14 Nov 2018

Awesome chapter.

I like the title of this chapter.  Et tu Time, Et tu?  Meaning something like 'you too Time, you too'? or maybe 'even you Time, even you?'  (From Julius Caesar). 

Even Time left her behind.  Poor Kagome. :(

I knew that something like the death of her friends would have left her with that profond sadness she had in her.  Did Kirara finely die too or is she still alive?

Hmmm...I wonder who this other nemesis can be and what her plans for Kagome and the jewel can be?

Thank you for updating and the extra long chapter.

Will be waiting for the next installments of this intriguing story.

Excellent writing!!!

 

 

 


Annie (Chapter 6) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

Wow. I did not see this coming. Kagome had lost everything that was near and dear to her.  I see why she was in a fog all those years ago.

I'm glad Sesshomaru beast had stumbled upon her when she was at her lowest. This is a fascinating story.  I cannot wait to see what happens next.


Jamie (Chapter 6) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

Holy hell, that was dark... necessity for such darkness is understood, but damn. Your writing is amazing, though. Takes a lot to capture that kind of darkness... looking forward to what comes next! 


Blommie8 (Chapter 6) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

Annie (Chapter 5) - Sat 10 Nov 2018

Loved this chapter.  I'm so happy that Chikara finally have his father in his life.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 5) - Fri 09 Nov 2018

A good chapter to read.

Is it probably safe to say that all the members of the pack, save Kagome, perished during the final battle with Naraku?   :(

If so, then that would be a good reason for Kagome's deep and profound sadness unless there is another reason other than death.  :|

Yay, Sesshomaru's heart of ice maybe melting towards his new found family, whether he wants to admit it or not, Kagome and Chikara is his family now.  Lol :)

Hmmm, where or what has happened to Rin, Jaken and Ah-Un?  I know...I know, you will get around to it later on, right? Lol  :)

I know Sesshomaru will say yes to his son's request to call him father...who can turn down a child, right?  Maybe Sesshomaru can but I doubt it in this case, so I will patiently be waiting for your update to validate this.

Thanks for updating so quickly and good luck on your lawsuit.

Wonderful writing!!!

 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Nov 2018

A nice tender and a bit sad chapter.

I seem to have more affection for the Beast side of Sesshomaru, at the moment, than the so call rational side of him.

The rational Sesshomaru always seem to be a 'debbie downer'  lol :)

Such a conumdrum of mystery surrounding Kagome about the fate of her friends and her life thus far.  

Will rational Sesshomaru ever come to love and respect Kagome the same way his Beast does?  Will he ever appreciate the fact that she gave him a full blood youkai heir despite the fact that she is a human and a miko?  Will any future pups be full blood youkai also or was Chikara a one time fluke?  He is such a brave and sweet pup...Sesshomaru should be proud of his son; well at least the Beast is proud.  lol  :)

Loving this story and looking for more chapters soon, if RL allows you. ;)

Wonderful writing!!!


Kris (Chapter 4) - Fri 09 Nov 2018

I like this version of the overdone beast side takes over Sesshoumaru and mates kagome story.  I like the little boy a lot too.


Kat (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

Love It


Annie (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

I can't wait for the next chapter.  I want to know what happened to her friends. 


ALostChildFromHeaven (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 Nov 2018

here for it! *gives a high five* can't wait for the next chapter


SammyJams (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Nov 2018

I gobbled all 3 chapters up! I ove it so far! Keep it going!


Annie (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Nov 2018

This is getting good.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Nov 2018

Awesome chapter.  Wonderfully written.

Sesshomaru's beast is interesting and his so-called rational side is so irrational sometimes.  So who is actually the smarter of the two one would wonder?  lol  :)

I enjoyed reading this and looking for more...keep it coming.

Excellent writing!!!


Sesskagaddict89 (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Nov 2018

I love the fact that his beast is being the rational side for once. Can't wait to read more


Mel (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Nov 2018

please keep it up! I’m loving this story!


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