Reviews for Unforgivable by Walter205

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Bree (Chapter 8) - Fri 30 Nov 2018

I don’t often leave reviews, but I just finished chapter eight (new reader to your story), and holy. Freaking. Crow. I was *not* expecting that turn, and to stun me speechless in such a way is so significant that I simply had to drop a review. I’m thoroughly enjoying your story and will be clicking the “follow” button shortly. Thank you so much for this!


Cheyanna (Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Nov 2018

I‘m looking forward to more!!!:) I hope Kagome agrees to leave though she has no reason to refuse and I’m glad the women came together to prove Kagome’s book true. I like Inukimi and I’m hoping Sesshomaru gets a hold of Naraku though Inukimi would probably utterly destroy him too. Thanks for updating! 


Cheyanna (Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Nov 2018

I‘m looking forward to more!!!:) I hope Kagome agrees to leave though she has no reason to refuse and I’m glad the women came together to prove Kagome’s book true. I like Inukimi and I’m hoping Sesshomaru gets a hold of Naraku though Inukimi would probably utterly destroy him too. Thanks for updating! 


Skylar (Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Nov 2018

Poor Kagome.


Blommie8 (Chapter 11) - Mon 26 Nov 2018

VS (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

Goodness, I have goosebumps all over. This scene, where all the females entered the hall, was just incredible! United girl power!!! I loved it! I was so afraid after Naraku told those lies. Afraid that no one is going to believe Kagome. Well, he think that he can hide forever? Let's see, asshole!

I'm super glad, that SessMama is so supportive. Kagome needs a female companion. And I was actually laughing, when she didn't let him group hug them! He was sulking! :D That was just funny!

 

I'm looking forward to your next update!


Cheyanna (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Nov 2018

I‘m so glad the townspeople know the truth. I hope they catch Naraku and give him what he deserves. I’m looking forward to more!


Blommie8 (Chapter 10) - Mon 12 Nov 2018
i like your story. how you make the rape's become so complicated. including a lot of murder and suicide. im sorry for kagome's mother and her brother. this rape case like a big epidemic.

demon13o (Chapter 9) - Tue 06 Nov 2018

Wew, talk about dark ending to that chapter. Seems you have a grudge against Kagome, done beat up the poor thing. Time to add this story to my list and wait for the next chapter.


Zinhle (Chapter 9) - Tue 06 Nov 2018

What a heartbreaking chapter. Thank you and please update some more.


Cheyanna (Chapter 9) - Mon 05 Nov 2018

I’m looking forward to more!!:) This is so dark but I can’t help but want to read more! I’m glad she managed to use the gun too. 


VS (Chapter 9) - Mon 05 Nov 2018

Hello,

like his father Inuyasha took the cowardly way out. Now, that he was cured he had the opportunity to think about his actions and at least "try" to make amends. Yet, he decided to not only kill himself but this guy for Kagome too. Like that is something she would ever want. It just shows how little Inuyasha actually knows her!

I'm super angry with Houjo. Did he not say to Sesshoumaru that he can guarantee her security? Where were they when Kagome got attacked?! It seems that Houjo has just a big mouth.

It may sound strange, but I have to say that I'm glad that Kagome shot them. It shows that she finally developed a will to live. Though I was satisfied to read that Kouga isn't dead. That would be too easy. He should suffer a bit. I'm curious if Kagome will have the gut to confront him in the hospital?

Anyway, Kagome has nobody in this world now except of Sesshoumaru. And I'm curious to read what will happen next! 

I'm looking forward to your next update!

 

Afterthought: what kind of f*ed up city is this? They are going to be angry at Kagome because Kouga is their only successful player?! What?! I do want to know what the media is going to say. And if Sesshoumaru is going to make a public statement? Will he show the world that he is supporting Kagome? Will he go against the whole city? Questions after questions...I can't wait to read!


Sesskagaddict89 (Chapter 9) - Mon 05 Nov 2018

This is such a dark story but I love it. Poor Kagome though. I really hope things start getting better. Update soon


Mira Bailey (Chapter 9) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

Ya know it sick to take pleasure as Sesshomaru did in the fact that Kagome lost everyone in her family, while he at least he had someone. She is the victim .


waterwomen1414 (Chapter 8) - Tue 23 Oct 2018

Before you mentioned that Sesshomaru would be taking responsibility for Kagome. I wonder how that is going to be implemented when they just allowed her to leave alone. Wish Inuyasha would have made a better turnaround but at least he did something right. 


SammyJams (Chapter 6) - Tue 09 Oct 2018

Can’t wait for more!


VS (Chapter 6) - Sun 07 Oct 2018

Hello,

I'm glad that Sesshoumaru reacted this way. He seems to be the only member of his family who sees reason. Though I feel sorry for him. He is the only one who didn't something wrong, yet he is the only one who has to deal with the consequences!

His idea to take Kagome in and send a message is really good. And I do believe he will meet some resistance in Kagome. She will feel like a burden to him and since she already feels like she deserved what happened, Sesshoumaru will have to find the right arguments.

This was a really interesting chapter. There is only one thing I didn't really like. But that is only my personal opinion: I was disappointed that you used a chemical imbalance to "excuse" Inuyasha's behaviour. You took here an easy way out, where it would have been much more interesting to read about his reasons for his decisions and his thoughts. Rather than him being cured by hormones.

But maybe you will take your time to do this with one of the other team members, when Sesshoumaru finds them? After all it would be impossible that all of them have/had this kind of chemical imbalance.

 

I'm looking forward to your next update!


Cheyanna (Chapter 6) - Sun 07 Oct 2018

I‘m glad Inuyasha really wasn‘t as evil as I thought him to be. I’m looking forward to more though! Thanks for updating!:) 


Faith (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Oct 2018

Thank you so much for adding the content warnings. 


SammyJams (Chapter 5) - Tue 02 Oct 2018

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!!!


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