Reviews for Unforgivable by Walter205

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SammyJams (Chapter 6) - Tue 09 Oct 2018

Can’t wait for more!


VS (Chapter 6) - Sun 07 Oct 2018

Hello,

I'm glad that Sesshoumaru reacted this way. He seems to be the only member of his family who sees reason. Though I feel sorry for him. He is the only one who didn't something wrong, yet he is the only one who has to deal with the consequences!

His idea to take Kagome in and send a message is really good. And I do believe he will meet some resistance in Kagome. She will feel like a burden to him and since she already feels like she deserved what happened, Sesshoumaru will have to find the right arguments.

This was a really interesting chapter. There is only one thing I didn't really like. But that is only my personal opinion: I was disappointed that you used a chemical imbalance to "excuse" Inuyasha's behaviour. You took here an easy way out, where it would have been much more interesting to read about his reasons for his decisions and his thoughts. Rather than him being cured by hormones.

But maybe you will take your time to do this with one of the other team members, when Sesshoumaru finds them? After all it would be impossible that all of them have/had this kind of chemical imbalance.

 

I'm looking forward to your next update!


Cheyanna (Chapter 6) - Sun 07 Oct 2018

I‘m glad Inuyasha really wasn‘t as evil as I thought him to be. I’m looking forward to more though! Thanks for updating!:) 


Faith (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Oct 2018

Thank you so much for adding the content warnings. 


SammyJams (Chapter 5) - Tue 02 Oct 2018

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!!!


Mary J Dolph (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Oct 2018

Too dark for me, but I'm sure many would agree that you have a well written story. I wish you luck on this tale and hope you write one I will be able to enjoy.

 

   No offense but some of us just can't read it, it's just too much wrong and hits too close to personal facts in ones life. Love your skill with the written word however.


Nile (Chapter 5) - Tue 02 Oct 2018

How sad for their family and for Kagome. My curiosity is still peaked. Thanks for updating!


Blommie8 (Chapter 5) - Tue 02 Oct 2018
i hope sesshoumaru learn the truth and accept it...

Cheyanna (Chapter 5) - Mon 01 Oct 2018

I’m looking forward to more!! Thanks for updating. I wonder how Sesshomaru will react. 


Blommie8 (Chapter 4) - Mon 01 Oct 2018

Drianax (Chapter 4) - Mon 01 Oct 2018

Interesting fic.  Pretty dark so far...will you b lightening it up?  Now that the Inu no Taisho has commiTed suicide, will Sess blame Kagome?  What will happen to her PTSD that I'm assuming she'll have? How will this all end?  Update soon!


sesshys_jaded_samuri (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

Gah!  I have been crying since Chapter 1. Keep it up.


Crimson Rose (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

I love your stories Walter but this ones a bit hard for me. As a parent I can understand InuTaisho’s pain but I don’t think I’d be able to do what he did. Hopefully when Sesshomaru finds out, he won’t do the same to her. i do feel sorry for Sess cause now he’s all alone. i do hope Sesshomaru will take care of Kagome but with this story I don’t know what will happen. T_T 


Jean (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

Oh my gosh, such a sad story. Really feel like Kags is going to be blamed for the wardens death even though she is the victim. 

However looking forward to the next chapter.


toni (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

Poor Kagome! I am bawling my eyes out with this intense chapter. 


trinity3000 (Chapter 4) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

I feel like Touga took a cowards way out.  He suddenly realized that he had done something horrible and instead of facing up to it and somehow trying to make amends, he killed himself.  

 

It will be messed up if Muso's partner turned out to be Naraku.  That would mean that the 2 guys that killed Kagome's dad would both have raped her.

 

I guess it is up to Sesshomaru to set some things right.  I hope he can fix some of this mess.  At least punish the correct people.


Faith (Chapter 1) - Sat 29 Sep 2018

I really would have appreciated some content warnings on this fic. The MA rating and "tragedy, angst" genre are nowhere near sufficient. I had no idea what I was getting into when I started reading this and I really really did not need to be taken to the places this had me revisiting. 

 

If you cafre at all to take recommendations to prevent harm to other survivors, please include, at the bare minimum, the following warnings:

Gang rape, victim blaming, suicide

 


Cheyanna (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

It’s incredibly dark but I’m waiting on the next chapter anyway. I’m glad she didn’t suffer all night and I’m glad the guilt tore him up enough. Thanks for updating. 


Anonymous (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

Holy crap that was incredibly intense!!! I want to say I’m glad Kagome didn’t suffer all night but those injuries. Gosh I’m so glad the guilt was eating him alive. I am SO eating on the next chapter here. Thanks for updating. 


merrrcurius (Chapter 4) - Fri 28 Sep 2018

woahhhhhh the substance is thiiiiiick with this one. i'm so glad shippou and hojo came to her defense. what a twister dude! muso & then inutashio... man. it just got deep. i wonder how sesshou is going to react hearing that gunshot...i'm curious as to who & what betrayed hojo, too. he seems distant, not himself. he must have been hurt really bad :/


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