Reviews for Claimed by Myella

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VS (Chapter 11) - Sun 10 Feb 2019

Hello,

I just love the way you portray InuMama here. This is such a typical situation: Grown up child doesn't check in on mom, so he gets a surprise visit! :P Or later on: Son demands that the barrier gets down - no reaction from mom - son tells another person to tell his mom to ... :D had me laughing here!

The fighting scene was detailed without being boring. And Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru know for sure now that Kagome doesn't need their protection. She can kick butts by herself! Theirs too! :P

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.


Krista (Chapter 11) - Sun 10 Feb 2019

Whoo that was intense. I wonder how much Kagome will reveal to them, at this point. Can't wait to read more!


Annie (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Feb 2019

I like Sesshomaru mother InuKimi because she likes to taunt people.  She is so mysterious. Hurray for Kagome for defeating her. 


Eliona (Chapter 11) - Sat 09 Feb 2019

Yay! An update :) great chapter, hope you have a swift recovery.


SmilingFool (Chapter 11) - Fri 08 Feb 2019

Oh wow what a chapter...  Loved it so very much.  I'm glad Kagome proved herself yet even the mother knew Kagome was more than just human oh what fun she will have trying to find out.  I'm sorry about your hand or hands, not being able to do anything normal is a pain in the rear however, you'll heal and I hope it improves...  Thanks for the update can't wait for the next one to excited....


Utsukushi tenshi (Chapter 10) - Tue 13 Nov 2018

I'm so glad to be stumbled in to this  story cause I really enjoyed reading this. Though to there's mistakes here and there but still it doesn't affect the flow of the story, it's tolerable. I say I like your OC's Lord nozumo and his son, tho there was some point that I really expect them as perverts as how they are being describe in the story but no, I really didn't see it coming, that I didn't expect them to be so nice with kagome,so nice enough to adopt her and add her on their pact, I really like this story so I will stay tuned for more. Thank you!


VS (Chapter 10) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

Hello,

I'm so glad you told us finally about Aisoku's feelings towards Kagome. I was wondering all the time if he was seriously interested in her, but it seems that he's not. One mystery solved. :)

This chapter was really nice. I do believe both of them deserved some time alone, some time to bond. And after all this action it was good to read about something less hectic. Your timing was perfect here! Well done!

There were a few grammar mistakes in this chapter. You even forgot a few times a word, like in “This Sesshomaru wants to be his mate." There was also ”It matters not if the hanyou to me." The mistakes didn't disturb the reading too much. Just wanted to let you know, because this is stuff you can correct easily by proofreading the chapter again.

Also thumb up for the length of all of your chapters! Naturally, I love lengthy chapters! :)

I'm looking forward to your next update!

 

 


Lauren (Chapter 10) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

Naraku believes himself to be more intelligent than everyone else and that will be his downfall. I do wonder how he survived... 

I hope Inuyasha wasnt doing anythin inappropriate when Sessho came back, but I am happy that at least the first hurdle is behind them. They really need to communicate more. And Kagome needs to stop avoiding Miroku, Sango and Shippo.     


Faith (Chapter 10) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

Gahhh! Naraku is so awful. I'm so glad Sesshoumaru was able to help her and also that he's respecting her need to consent. It's good they had a talk and cleared some things up too!


Eliona (Chapter 10) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

Another excellent chapter! <3 and oooh so hot *-* I’m happy to see sesshy and  relationship come to a start, also thought it was clever that the partial mark is webbing haha. Keep up the great work :)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 10) - Sun 04 Nov 2018

Awesome chapter and a perfect lemon.  There are a few spelling and grammatical errors but still very nicely written.  :)

Loving it.  Looking forward to future updates.

Thank you updating.

Excellent job!!!


Orotami (Chapter 10) - Sat 03 Nov 2018

Wow! Very well written lemon! Beautiful chapter. Can't wait for the next update! 


S4toonee (Chapter 9) - Tue 23 Oct 2018

I am greatly enjoying what you’ve done so far. I like that it is “canon with a twist” setting.  Looking forward to updates.


candy (Chapter 9) - Mon 22 Oct 2018

Oh keep the updates coming. It is getting so good.


Eliona (Chapter 9) - Mon 22 Oct 2018

Im stunned! What a reveal xD great job, can’t wait to see what’s next!


Blommie8 (Chapter 9) - Mon 22 Oct 2018

KyraTekak (Chapter 8) - Sun 21 Oct 2018

Awesome story so far 


Blommie8 (Chapter 8) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

Eliona (Chapter 8) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

Nice to see the calm after the storm, great update. Keep up the fantastic work :D


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 8) - Mon 15 Oct 2018

Very nice chapter.  I think you did a wonderful job in writing it. 

It shows how Inuyasha has come to terms with his feelings about Kagome and the realization that they cannot be together as a couple because that time has come and gone.  It seems that he has accepted that their relationship will be just as best friends and possibly brother and sister if she accepts Sesshomaru as mate.

I think Sesshomaru should be straight forward with Kagome and let her know of his feelings for her instead of being like 'I'm alpha and I will mate you whether you like it or not'...that would be a bad move and I think he knows this but somehow he will probably fuck it up anyway.  lol  :)

I also think that Kagome, if she accepts Sesshomaru, should be open and honest with him and tell him everything about who and what she is instead of being all 'Kagome' by keeping secrets because she thinks it is best to keep the burden on herself as per usual.  :(

Loving this story and looking forward to more updates.

Great job!!!

Cheers!!!


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