Reviews for Control by wonderbug

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Tanii (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Feb 2019

It's been soo long. I'm guessing this is why you said read at your own risk  :/


DemonessMegan (Chapter 16) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

I'm dying without an update but I'm sure when it comes out it will be worth the wait!


katrina (Chapter 16) - Fri 04 Jan 2019

This got dark... and I like it! Oh no!!! 


Mysheeki (Chapter 16) - Fri 28 Dec 2018

Wow, I’m at the edge of my seat! Please continue?


DemonessMegan (Chapter 16) - Tue 25 Dec 2018

Oh shit! My anticipation for the next chapter is at an all time high! ????


Eliona (Chapter 16) - Sun 23 Dec 2018

Things are about to get heated! YAAAS! Keep it up <3


Blommie8 (Chapter 16) - Sun 23 Dec 2018
why i feel like sesshoumaru always love?like?want kagome for a long time? like when he said there's "always" a woman in his mind. maybe he goes crazy and deperate to have her and finally he murder all of these woman. i couldn't imagine when kagome find out that she was the cause all of the murder. i hope she will forgive herself. and why she is so bitter here....when she is always nice and pure girl.

Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 16) - Sat 22 Dec 2018

WOW! What a way to bring him back in to the mix. The interaction between is great. You can almost taste the disappointment in his voice that he can't have what he really wants and that glamour. Oh how she was drawn to him but in side she didn't want any of it. Him looking at her at the end of the chapter. I feel like he is going to have her pinned in place as he has his way with this poor girl. Knowing that he really wants her to be Kagome just makes it better. I can't wait to see what the next chapter has to bring.


The-infamous-one (Chapter 16) - Sat 22 Dec 2018

Why can she not realise that it's her that sesshoumaru wants?  And that inuyasha knew it as well?


ponpiri (Chapter 16) - Sat 22 Dec 2018

Kanako reminds me of Gollum. Just... creepy and sneaky. And I know this story isn't supposed to be funny, but the way Sesshoumaru cut through Kagome's yelling about 'seducing' her made me laugh for some reason.


Skylar (Chapter 15) - Thu 13 Dec 2018

Oh wow


ponpiri (Chapter 15) - Tue 11 Dec 2018

Geez....


Eliona (Chapter 15) - Tue 11 Dec 2018

Curious... introducing a new element (character). Interested to see what you are plotting now :) great job.


Blommie8 (Chapter 15) - Tue 11 Dec 2018
i forgot whote the women was? i'll read it again. i miss sesshoumaru. but the tension between kagome and kohaku make me worried. that kohaku finally found out what kagome's hiding. really good story!! next please

ponpiri (Chapter 14) - Wed 05 Dec 2018

Aw, man. Kagome, what are you doing? Funny how I said in your other story that she was Inuyasha's rock, but in this story she's losing it because she lost him and her bro-in-law is a real, for real serial killer.

 

I'm tense wondering how this will all end.


Alison (Chapter 14) - Mon 03 Dec 2018

Honestly, I get that she's grieving hard. But her anger and bitterness is making her really unlikable as a character. 


Eliona (Chapter 14) - Sun 02 Dec 2018

Oh no! D: poor kags, seems like she just can’t catch a break. I admire how strong you’ve made her though :) keep up the great work, and I hope you have a happy holiday.


Blommie8 (Chapter 14) - Sun 02 Dec 2018
i like the drama between all of them....it's all make sense. i don't know what would happen when they knew it's all sesshoumaru thing. the conflict between kagome and kohaku is great. only a few author make the relationship into story. i know maybe it's hard for him to move on cause he had crush on her for a long time. the story worth to read. great!!!!!!

Cheyanna (Chapter 14) - Sun 02 Dec 2018

Whoah there Kagome has become a quite the tyrant. Manipulating the elders and now her friends? I wonder when they’ll start to question her sanity. If they haven’t already. She makes some good points though.


Mysheeki (Chapter 14) - Sun 02 Dec 2018

Oh the tension! Nicely written!!! I could feel it from over here! Please continue!


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