Reviews for Control by wonderbug

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Blommie8 (Chapter 11) - Mon 22 Oct 2018

Eliona (Chapter 11) - Sun 21 Oct 2018

These cliff hangers are like on another level though xD dang... and Kohaku’s words! My goodness you are so good at really expressing character emotions. Keep up the great work xD 


FayeMegan (Chapter 11) - Sun 21 Oct 2018

So angsty, but I can't stop reading.


ponpiri (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

Well, damn.


ponpiri (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

Well, damn.


randomfan17 (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

I couldn't put it down.  No describing how much I loved it. 


witty (Chapter 10) - Fri 19 Oct 2018

I've been on the edge of my seat since chapter 1. You have revived my interest in sesshomaru/kagome. Thank you! 


Blommie8 (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Oct 2018
no sesshy-kun..

Eliona (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Oct 2018

That was surprisingly hot! I had never read a lime with Kohaku and Kagome, so it was really unique and well done. Great job! You’ve got excellent writing :) very excited to see what you have in store next. 


Cheyanna (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Oct 2018

I’m looking forward to more! I’ve been reading the blog version but I’m glad this one is catching up! I really love this though. I always look forward to updates! 


SammyJams (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Oct 2018

Super dark and sexual - I love it!


Lorena (Chapter 10) - Thu 18 Oct 2018

Oh snap,  this chapter came out of left field,lol. I  never could've imagined it,  but this chapter really did clear up and introduce some things you mentioned so far. My only concern throughout this whole chapter is what will happen the next day? I hope their relationship isn't ruined once she either says it'll never happen again or that it was a mistake- Kagome is a very complex character for me, even harder to figure out than Sesshomaru,  so I cant even begin to figure out what she'll do nexr


Mysheeki (Chapter 9) - Wed 17 Oct 2018

Wow. The suspense is awesome! You have a way with the flow of your words? Please continue soon <3


FayeMegan (Chapter 9) - Tue 16 Oct 2018

This story is so riveting!


Pamelamoores (Chapter 9) - Sat 13 Oct 2018

Definitely enjoying the additional chapters!!


Eliona (Chapter 9) - Sat 13 Oct 2018

Such a great job in teally sxpressivg Kagome’s anguish and despair Q_Q I was in tears!! Keep up the great work, really looking forward to the next chapter!


Blommie8 (Chapter 9) - Sat 13 Oct 2018

Blommie8 (Chapter 8) - Sat 06 Oct 2018
i hope kagome can forgive sesshoumaru... poor sesshy, he's the vilain here... want to hate him...but....it's seskag fanfic! how am i suppose to hate him?

Eliona (Chapter 8) - Sat 06 Oct 2018

Oooh! Very dark and twisted story so far xD I’m loving it, keep up the great work.


Lorena (Chapter 8) - Fri 05 Oct 2018

I know it's naturally to draw a conclusion based on this whirlwind of a chapter, but I'm curious about how Kagome will react once she's home...like how did they get to chapter one? I cant help but wonder if things may have changed had she not had her angry hidden, would he have sensed it and stopped it or would he have gone to her? Is this something completely different than his beast escaping,  like an anomalous trait inu demons have?I would love to read Seshomaru's POV if it doesn't measure with your flow,  I feel like even if I know so much about him, I really know nothing.


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