Awesome first chapter - can’t wait for more! I enjoy how you add different mythologies into your writing. 

Great story, please update the next chapter quickly!

Very interesting start. I love the story about the star stones and also the drastic change between the happy family life at the beginning and the development and suspense at the end of the chapter. It‘s an amazing start to an intriguing story. Can‘t wait for the next chapter. I am curious what happened to Kagome‘s family and What will happen to Kagome in the Lord‘s care.