Reviews for Erotes' Touch by DelphinieN

Jane (Chapter 12) - Wed 13 Jun 2018

Sterility means being unable to reproduce

And fertility means being highly likely to reproduce another word for this is virile

English is a hard language with subthe changes to words that changes the meaning.

I was unsure if you meant to use sterile in this chapter.

I love your work and English is in fact the hardest to learn so you have my applause regardless 


LadyNita (Chapter 11) - Tue 12 Jun 2018

I cant get enough of this story


Niomi (Chapter 11) - Sat 02 Jun 2018

Ok I totally get what you’re doing and I don’t blame you! I don’t ever want the story to end anywayy. I don’t think it’s about morals and values in fiction, sometimes these things happen in real life and it’s what people deal with. thanks for the quick update, it was a real treat. I love seeing her relationship with Sess progress! It is so well written, it’s like a scene playing out in my mind. I can feel the connection! I can’t wait to see what happens next. Thank you x


Niomi (Chapter 1) - Fri 01 Jun 2018

Despite what you think, your writing is amazing. They all are very true to character, I love the connection, the emotions, everything! I look forward to more Sess & Kah development. Their connection is envious. I like how is isn’t in denial of their connection. Inuyasha really does going through the emotional roller coaster of a cheater. Great work! excited for more! 


Saraf Anjum (Chapter 10) - Wed 23 May 2018

Your writing style is wonderful, dear. Don't know if it's just bad time but recently all I can find are badly written; barely there storyline, fanfictions. So finding and reading your story is like much needed fresh air. Thank you for taking time out of your days to write this story. 

The plot is very common. But we love this genre as much as you, coz we are all hopeless fans of Sesshomaru x Kagome (~???)~ Looking forward to the next installment dear.

P.S. Will my emoji come out right?


Kagxsesshy4life (Chapter 9) - Fri 11 May 2018

THIS WAS HOT. I HOPE YOU UPDATE MORE!!!


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 9) - Fri 11 May 2018

Dang...Poor Sesshoumaru...hell poor Kagome. Well I’m Kags case she could just ya know do the right thing and dump InuYasha....I know I know morals and ish! she is already being a hypocrite and will continue to be if she drags this out .

But I’ll be lying if I said I didn’t enjoy their secret rendezvous! It’s hot and cute in a way lol can’t wait for the next installment!!


Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 8) - Sun 06 May 2018

How evil of you to leave us there and wanting more! I love you for it. Reading about meeting each other again was a wonderful vision for the mind. How you word things brings up images that I wish I could bring to life in art. Keep up the great work and I hope the next chapter will not be long to follow.


maria (Chapter 8) - Fri 04 May 2018

Yeedeyyyyyyyy great chapter mean mean ending! !! Pleeease don't leave us waiting to long


anon22 (Chapter 8) - Fri 04 May 2018

YAAASSS A round of applause and standing ovation for this one


Natalia (Chapter 8) - Fri 04 May 2018

I feel so frustrated on Kagome's behalf. Inuyasha is the one at fault. And now Sesshoumaru believes the worst of her. I so hope that everyone Will soon find out what a jerk inuyasha really is!

Thx for updating!

I love the mythology bits you include!


Anon2303 (Chapter 7) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

OH MY GOODNESS. I'M ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT!! Honestly this story is so good and don't sell yourself short you are a great writer


Natalia (Chapter 6) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

Aw sesshoumaru is in denial....

And I absolutely love the intricacies of Greek mythology in the plot.

Good job.

 


Lucy Morningstar (lazy to log in) (Chapter 6) - Thu 19 Apr 2018

Ohmyyyy I love this story! I love the way you portray Sessh's personality and how they met at the jazz club. It was soo romantic! Their writing is so vivid and beautiful and flows naturally! Also I loved how you justified Inuyasha's affair. I was hooomaigoddd when it turned out to be sweet, lil Rin! Hahahah that was a lovely surprise, for sure. I don't hate Inuyasha and I always try to listen to both sides, and although you're right, cheating is a sensitive topic to write, don't worry about it! I think you're handling the subject very well! Be reading you! (sorry for rambling too much)


Alexis (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Apr 2018

Following! Great story.....can’t wait till Kagome and Sesshoumaru run into each other!

 


Dedge (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Apr 2018

I am happy to see this back


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