Reviews for Erotes' Touch by DelphinieN

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Blommie8 (Chapter 23) - Thu 13 Jun 2019

He is stubborn


Lady Artemis (Chapter 23) - Tue 28 May 2019

Omg,omg!!! I'm so happy you updated. The writing is amazing! 


sesshomarupatrick (Chapter 23) - Tue 28 May 2019

I love this sexy, epic, humorous fanfiction with all my heart!! <3<3 Whenever I read this fiction, I feel excited and nervous just like when I watch a drama on real TV. That's how I felt when Kagome got a call from Inuyasha in Chapter 3, and when Sesshoumaru blackmailed Kagome sweetly(from the reader's point of view) in Chapter 14. As I felt in chapter 3, I sometimes feel sorry for Inuyasha....Unfortunately, his brother is so attractive and Kagome is not obliged to endure her boyfriend's cheating until the end. I know it's childish to respond to a flame with the same flame, but..Not as much as cheating a faithful and loving lover just for one's own amusement. In chapter one, she cried because of her unfaithful boyfriend! I felt like my world was falling apart when she cried, thinking of her boyfriend having an affair with an unknown woman. No one has the right to make her cry ;( It is the sole authority of the author. In the newly updated chapter, when Sesshoumaru was handed a photo of his half brother and his assistant cheating from Myoga, I kicked Inuyasha's butt in my imagination. I can't bear to hate him, but he's a bit of a jerk. Chapter 23 was a particularly tense story, but I laughed a lot when Sesshoumaru confused 'I' and his usual third person when he mentioned himself in a conversation with Myoga. I thought of chapter 14 as he was about to say 'I'. Apparently, he promised not to use the third person in negotiations with the 'sorcerer'! LOL


P.S. If you don't mind, I'd like to ask you a question! If the answer can be a spoiler for your work, or if it's inconvenient to answer, ignore the question. Is Inuyasha the only lover for Rin now? I felt some doubt that after Rin had fun with Inuyasha, she chose to remain the lover of Inuyasha without being surprised, even though she revealed that Inuyasha could pose a sufficient threat to their relationship. (Inuyasha is already taken by Kagome)


Peridot Miko (Chapter 23) - Tue 28 May 2019

Great chapter! Something was about to give and the way you lay things out worked really well. I'll wait for the next step with baited breath.


Andrea (Chapter 21) - Sun 10 Feb 2019

I really do like this story you have a good plot and lemons. Maybe a baby will a happen? It would be cute and a way for her to confront inuyasha about his affair and break up with him.


R (Chapter 21) - Sat 09 Feb 2019

I continue to love this story. There’s some kind of tender, albeit angst-filled chemistry that you’ve built between these two in your writing that keeps you painfully attached to their plight. They seem so fragile and sweet; you want to savor the closeness for them, but also feel down because you can see that it’s headed into a space of pain when no one can really communicate honestly. I can’t help but be so frustrated with Kagome. I remind myself that her inability to face her own truth by ‘acting out’ is a very human thing to do and that most of us have been guilty of it at one point or another. It’s still just painful and frustrating to see someone vacillate even when it feels like the answer is right there. Sigh... Always look forward to your lovely writing :) ~


Niomi (Chapter 21) - Wed 06 Feb 2019

I live for your updates! Ya never disappoint. You should be a director of a drama with all these emotions and realistic scenes youre creating in my mind!


CK (Chapter 21) - Mon 04 Feb 2019

I love this!!! Please dont stop writing. I look forward to a new chapter soon!!!


CK (Chapter 20) - Wed 09 Jan 2019

I love this. Your writing is amazing. Please update as soon as you can. 


CK (Chapter 20) - Wed 09 Jan 2019

I love this. Your writing is amazing. Please update as soon as you can. 


R (Chapter 20) - Wed 09 Jan 2019

Aw, these two are killing me softly with their sad, unspoken (mutual) tenderness. Poor Sesshoumaru - he’s so cracked open in this chapter. You did an awesome job of portraying the unraveling of his insides for Kagome. On the other hand, it’s painful to see Kagome tighten her own noose in this double life. It was refreshing to see her work herself up into some anxious courage, but I’m also hoping she can find a way out of her self-justification loop. Her acting out is the same as Inuyasha’s, neither able to really talk in a mature way about the real failures in their relationship. Heartbreaking...for everyone! Amazing writing. You’ve really captured their torment in a way that the reader can easily empathize with. Thanks for the great chapter!


blommie8 (Chapter 20) - Wed 09 Jan 2019
kagome!!! you must broke with inucheater asap!!! why did you keep that unhealty relationship? even you and sesshy kun not together at the end..at least be a though girl for once. life is not all about boyfriend.... if i were you...i'll dump him on the trash with his misstress.and find my own happines...why do i have to endure my self all about that cheating thing....it's wasting!!

maria (Chapter 20) - Tue 08 Jan 2019

I love thisss


Niomi (Chapter 20) - Tue 08 Jan 2019

Wow, you never disappoint! The detail, the image, the feels. You are amazing! What a real story unfolding. Always looking forward to your updates. Thank you so much!


jk (Chapter 20) - Mon 07 Jan 2019

Ok so Kagome is not going to be able to do anything. I think its time sesshomaru takes matters into his hand and finds about inuyasha cheating and then kekekeke.

 

Please tell me something like this is going to happen soon i would love to see how sesshomaru tortures inuyasha. ;D

 

Ps. Love the story .XOXO


Bruna (Chapter 1) - Fri 21 Dec 2018

Your writing is amazing, loving your story! Please, keep up <3


Miranda (Chapter 19) - Tue 11 Dec 2018

This story is soooo good! I come every so often just to see if you updated. Keep up the great work <33 


Blommie8 (Chapter 19) - Tue 11 Dec 2018

R (Chapter 19) - Mon 10 Dec 2018

Ah, the struggle to keep from falling is real... Their little dance is a few beautifully complicated moments from a wicked spiral. Can’t wait to see how Sesshoumaru‘s sickness and their time together shifts the tenuous connection! Lovely writing ~ thank you for the update!


blommie8 (Chapter 18) - Fri 16 Nov 2018

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