Hello,

I absolutely enjoyed reading this looong one shot! To me it felt like a natural extension of the anime!!! And that is something not everyone can do! So a big compliment for you, you did a truly amazing job here!!!

I loved that you took your time to let Sesshoumaru make his move. And all the staring was kind of romantic! :) It was nice to read a story where the brothers start to get along. And I liked your portrayal of Sesshoumaru. You showed us various sites of hos personalities, also that he is not used to have someone to care for him, and his jealousy of Inuyasha was just adorable! Though he is correct, that Inuyasha has immense luck! I laughed here with all the examples Sesshoumaru thought about!

Your idea with those small demons was really sweet! I believe that Daegyn might be a good father figure for Sesshoumaru! A really nice OC!

I'm looking forward to your next update!

Wow! That was a lovely long slow burn. Nicely done and the wait was well worth it. Sweet. Thanks so much. 

Great story, please update the next chapter quickly!

I loved it and the cliffhanger was so good, I love the detail and the way you portrayed sesshomaru. Can't wait for your next piece

I like the story very much. I didn't expect Sesshomaru to make his move so soon. It was a great cliffhanger.

I liked it a lot, very captivating! As I got closer to the bottom of the page I was getting sad because I didn't want it to end. I hope there will be more to this collection.

Bingo! I am loving chapter 1!!! Please post chapter 2 soon

Whoa! that was great, but we need more than a one-shot.

hot damn that  ending. yessss

That was really good. Looking forward to seeing more.

That was really good. Looking forward to seeing more.

It was a good one shot.  I enjoyed it immensely.  But you posted it twice.  I mean its twice in the same chapter.  Double posted, so you may want to take a look. 

Thx for posting.