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Knight of Disorder (Chapter 7) - Thu 11 Jan 2018

Good Story, question though.

Rin's full name is Katarin?

It just seemed odd since you tended to switch between them and it was touch confusing at first.

kb (Chapter 7) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

This was such a touching story. I’m so glad Rin got her Christmas wish! 

Merry Christmas Natalia!

Mia (Chapter 7) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

*bawls like a baby*


KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Very nice.  Nothing like a sweet sappy ending to make me smile. Thanks for this lovely little tale. Ill be looking forward To any new stories you have. Cheers!

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 7) - Tue 09 Jan 2018

Wow...a very good story.  I liked the ending alot...too bad the other twin had to die. It would have been awesome if she had lived.

It was a good thing that Sessomaru got custody of his son.  At least he has a chance to have a normal life and a real mother figure in his life.

And Rin gets to have her dream family and all the love that she deserved. She gets to live for herself and her twin.

Excellent writing.


Jennifer (Chapter 7) - Tue 09 Jan 2018

Such a short and sweet story. I enjoyed it tremendously! Although, I kinda would've liked to see Sesshomaru's mother see the error to her ways or rather all of the effects of her plotting/how many lives she ruined as a result. But overall, great story! Thanks for finishing this before you get busy at school (if I remember correctly...) and good luck with that, as well!

Cheyanna (Chapter 7) - Tue 09 Jan 2018

So awesome!!!! I love the ending!!!! I really enjoyed reading this!

waterwomen1414 (Chapter 7) - Tue 09 Jan 2018

It was cute but you really did leave alot of questions.

Ashlyn Braere (Chapter 7) - Tue 09 Jan 2018

While I was reading this, I had a flash of the kids grown up.

Kiyoshi inheriting his father's position, all the responsibilities and work.

Rin inheriting the shrine, being the shrine priestess and fully engaged in the spiritual work.

It'd be awesome to see the interactions of a supposedly simple shrine having such close connections to the Western rulers.  I can imagine scenes of the siblings meeting at both locations for a dinner or some function, just to catch up or supporting each other for a public event.  Scenes of one of them sending someone to the other, just knowing they could help and the person was worthy.  Scenes showing their closeness, even though they live very different lives.

I love how this story ended, please don't get me wrong.  I just had visions of their future.  So sweet.

Thank you for writing this story and sharing with us.  It's well appreciated.

Annie (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

This chapter was awesome.  I'm so proud of Sesshomaru. He finally had done the right thing and now they are family .  I  wish someone can go after Sesshomaru's mother because she was the cause of all this pain.

Cheyanna (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

I’m so happy!!!!!! Sesshomaru made me so proud using Tenseiga on those kids!!! I feel so happy for them and I hope Kagome will finally get her happy ever after now!!!

SesshyGome (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

Awe, this was so bittersweet!

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

This was so heartbreaking. Poor Kagome...I feel her pain.

I know you described Rin with silver hair and gold eyes like Sesshomaru, but did she have ears like Inuyasha or like her father?

Was she full-blood or hanyou?  And I am assuming that she is older than Sesshomaru's son...right??

Thanks for updating and I'm looking forward to the ending chapter.

Excellent writing.


Good luck with school!!!

cassandra (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

I loved this chapter! I almost started crying. I can't wait to see what happens next! 

KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

Oh YAY! You gave us a happy ending after all! No sad stories for Christmas! Thanks so much for finishing this one. 

waterwomen1414 (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

This chapter is simply adorable, but things never run smoothly do they? I wonder what his mother is going to say? I can't wait for your next chapter.

KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Sun 07 Jan 2018

Oh this is getting sadder and sadder! This story is wonderful, love the angst. Yep RL is back after the holidays. Hope yours was good. Your updates have been gifts. Thank you so much. Cheers!

The-infamous-one (Chapter 5) - Sun 07 Jan 2018

Hey, so just a few things. The last chapter and this chapter have a few flaws.  Last chapter you stated kagome came to tgeir residence to inform sesshoumaru he was a father and that rins only wish for christmas was to meet her father befire she passes. Now in this chapter you make it out to be that she came to sesshoumaru seeking answers and then pretty much tells him to f off  becaues she dosent  want to listen to him  but then shes welcome to come visit rin as if she wasnt on deaths door....  other then that good job. Hooe that helps

Cheyanna (Chapter 5) - Sun 07 Jan 2018

Oh my gosh this is making me cry! I can’t help  but hope Rin will make it still!!!! Can’t wait till you update!!!

Cheyanna (Chapter 5) - Sun 07 Jan 2018

Oh my gosh this is making me cry! I can’t help  but hope Rin will make it still!!!! Can’t wait till you update!!!

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