Reviews for Caniche by Elvis

Nilee1 (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

Okay, I get it. It's easier to understand when you use quotation marks for actual speech.


Nilee1 (Chapter 6) - Mon 08 Jan 2018

I'm confused; is he reading her thoughts?

 


ponpiri (Chapter 5) - Wed 29 Nov 2017

Interesting. A bit confusing, so I'm looking forward to some dialog. 


Eryn (Chapter 5) - Wed 22 Nov 2017

I love this!  I like that you pace yourself and don't push too much too soon.


Nilee1 (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Nov 2017

This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. There is poetry in your writing.


RandomReviewer (Chapter 2) - Mon 06 Nov 2017

I'll be watching out for updates on this one! So far I like the buildup and your use of imagery. Thanks! :-)


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