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princess of the western lands (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Nov 2017

Oh wow, I was so excited to see a new chapter for this story. Excellently written as usual and such details to describe what cannot be seen by mortal eyes. I love the slow and seamless crossing between Japan and Egypt. Will sesshomaru approach kagome right away or wait? Sesshomaru and Anubis will be quite sad that kagome is infatuated with inuyasha. Will nearly everything be like the original story line or with some differences? I know it's said that no one remembers their past lives but will kagome remember hers? 

 

Update soon onegai

 

Ja ne


Natalia (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Nov 2017

Beautiful chapter!

So sesshoumaru is sesshoumaru but not sesshoumaru we know right? And I am still confused about the merging of the two but we will see alongside the plot! Will sesshoumaru loose himself? Or will Anubis disappear more? So many questions!

I can't wait to see the meeting! Kagome is in for a big surprise!

And the duo is in for surprises as well as seeing what role will inuyasha have in her life! Lol

Thanks for updating


QUEEN_Cypher (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Nov 2017

wow! what a story, i can't wait until they meet. thanks for the story.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Nov 2017

I am trully amazed by this story so far. You have done a wonderful job of mixing Ancient Egyptian and Japanese mythology with a dash of actual points of historical facts into the Inuyasha fandom. It is brilliant, exciting and a joy to read.  

I loved chapter two. The unfolding of Anubis and Ikoris' relationship, their romantic love-making, Ikoris' death, and the emotional impact it had on Anubis was so heartfelt. Your description of their love-makng even aroused me. LOL  :)

The personification of Sesshomaru's beast as the embodiment of Anubis is a stroke of real imagination. It gives an in-depth meaning behind Sesshomaru's actions, thinking and personality. I also liked your idea of why Sesshomaru's childhood was the way it turned out to be. Also I liked your explanation of his 'real' feelings toward his relationship with his parents and his initial feelings and treatment of Inuyasha.

I love your rendition of why Kagome was chosen and how she came to be in Feudal Japan. I am looking forward to how you explain the 'real' reasons behind Kagome's feelings regarding Inuyasha. I would like to know why the gods decided to create a soul, such as hers, in the first place.

I'm all hyped up about the upcoming chapters to this intriguing story. Please post more soon. Excellent writing job!!!


TekoloKuautli (Chapter 3) - Tue 21 Nov 2017

Yay, new chapter! I like how this explains a little the fandom's 'inner beast' of Sesshomaru's but this dog is totally different, he has made no contact with Inuyasha and is not envious about his father's favoritism, also it looks like Inu no Taisho never had enough relation with his son and never gave him Tenseiga. A little sad about that because you'd think the old dog would have at least tried.

This Sesshomaru is so much more cold and detached, amazingly enough I believe with his upbringing he'd have a harder time trying to win Kagome over than his canon self since she is a people's person and all. It'd creep her out his obsession with her and his complete indiference to everything else, including the life/death of his only brother and all manners of life forms on Earth. Scratch that, she'd prefer the brash and wild Inuyasha than the emotionless and cold guy she won't be able to figure out no matter what her soul's attraction says, I imagine he'd slay people for insulting her and the like.

What about Jaken, Ah-Un and Rin? Jaken is convenient since he does simple bothersome things for him and Ah-Un carries stuff too.

Ohh~ I wanna read more! I love how you write :D


Cheyanna (Chapter 3) - Mon 20 Nov 2017

Ooooo this is pretty intense! Talk about love that transcends everything including time and the mortal plane! I like Sesshomaru’s attitude, I just always saw him as uncaring to most things and I’m amused at how alike Anubis and Sesshomaru are right now. I can’t wait until Kagome arrives on the scene! 


Haven (Chapter 3) - Mon 20 Nov 2017

Another amazing chapter. I hope you update soon!


TekoloKuautli (Chapter 2) - Sun 05 Nov 2017

I loved it!! Maybe even teared a little at the end hehe Anubis truly is a manly man, not in the machist concept but as in being in control and prioritizing; I mean, he sees his dead beloved, most would lose control completely. But no, first reassurance to her, then promise and do what is best, then grieve before doing something rash, next is taking care of her body and possessions, make sure she will be avenged comes fifth! And finally the burial. 

(The smut was awesome btw ;) )

 


princess of the western lands (Chapter 2) - Sat 04 Nov 2017

The second chapter is wonderful. Their time together was beautiful and excellently written while expressing that it is their first time in this physical way. It was different and tasteful in description. I liked how he didn't go after the humans deciding that he'd wait to see them but sent these hell hounds to haunt just them. How long will he wait to see her again? What shall happen now? Will kagome and sesshomaru come in to play or will there be more of ancient Egypt? Love your story.

 

Update soon onegai

Ja ne


MoonGoddess468 (Chapter 2) - Thu 02 Nov 2017

this chapter was absolutely beautifu! You are an amazing write! Please update soon I can't wait to see where you take this story.


Jean (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Nov 2017

Wonderful story, such a sad start to it though. I love the detail and imagery in your writing. You have made wonderful characters and I can't wait to see how it will play into the InuYasha story. 


Ruth Gustafson (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Nov 2017

I can not wait for the next chapters! This story draws me in because not o only am I a huge lover of Egyptian history, but I love how you are creating new back stories for our two favorite characters. I hope you update soon because I need to know what happens next.


Toni (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Nov 2017

I love this story  can't wait for the next chapter  you are a very gifted writer 


Natalia (Chapter 2) - Tue 31 Oct 2017

That was so beautiful and tragic at the same moment! Absolutely stunning! I adore the details you so meticulously put in every sentence and the emotions made my heart hurt! The intimate scene was absolutely beautiful, I could see the love and affection and caring and it was something that I really precieve as making love not sex! The pyramid was a stroke of genius! Overall I was deeply touched by this chapter! I am a fan of everything Egyptian, even studied Egyptology in university so to see something that I love so much written with inuyasha characters is amazing! I wasn't a fan of something like this until now, but I am certain this story will definitely become one of my favourite! 

On another note if you need some advice or opinion I am ready and eager to help! It is truly a beautiful piece! 

I literally can't wait to see more!

A big thank you for writing this!

Good luck!

 

P.s. happy Halloween!


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Oct 2017

Yea, I'm gonna need another chapter of this asap. lol Loving it so far.


princess of the western lands (Chapter 1) - Wed 04 Oct 2017

Oh wow. I love your story. This was unexpected and unique. I love the incredible amount of detail that you put in and how well done your research is. This almost makes me want to continue with the Egyptian universe and find out what happens. Will anubis find her in time or will he receive a terrible shock with the next soul. Why didn't he save her? She was calling to him or at least thinking about him and he returned her ikoris'  feelings. So why let her suffer, unless someone else stopped him from going to her? I also appreciate and love the glossary, it helps me picture better how the characters would look and their purposes.

 

Update soon onegai

Ja ne 


Ankoku (Chapter 1) - Sat 30 Sep 2017

Very interesting so far! I love anything dealing with Egyptian mythology so this is perfect! I love how you connected Anubis with his priestess and formed a love story between them, it's very fresh and original. I can't wait to see how you transition this between Kagome and Sesshoumaru .. will they have memories of their former selves? Can't wait until your next update! Take care!


Cheyanna (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 Sep 2017

Wow! Your story is prety awesome! Im going to assume that maybe Anubis rescues his human lover and she ends up as Kagomes mother or something, but whatever i cant wait to see how this plays out!!! I love the egyptian mythology and I always wished there were more stories with Sess/Kag in that context so Im really glad you came up with this idea! I cant wait for your next chapter! Please update soon!!!!!!


Cherryhair (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 Sep 2017

I am extremely excited by what this story may become I love all of your other stories and have great hopes for this one. I have no idea what will become of this but I have a feeling it will be great. I hope you update soon because I'm already brimming with excitement please keep up the good work.


Toni (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 Sep 2017

love this can't wait for more chapters 


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