Reviews for The Shoot by Dunkelgelb

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wonderbug (Chapter 5) - Fri 18 Jan 2019

OMG, when I saw you'd updated again, I almost died! From happiness of course XD

Woohoo, gotta love that SessKag action! Words can't express how deliciously raunchy your scenes are - but I gotta say I absolutely looooved the intimacy in their encounter. Made it even that much more erotic (how is that even possible?? lol)! The fangirl in me was doing cartwheels when he admitted that she was the best he'd ever had hehehe Oh man... (fans self)

Anyway, you are absolutely EVIL for ending the chapter where you did!! Kagome opening Sango to him should be the START of a chapter, not the ending! Hahaha but I'm just being greedy. ;)

You know I'll be anxiously awaiting that next chapter!! Keep up the awesome writing, my friend! <3

 


Orotami (Chapter 5) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

As always, it's a pleasure reading this. Hopefully, we see another update sooner than later. Till then! 


Cheyanna (Chapter 5) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

Thanks for updating! Can’t wait to read more!!:) 


Sessygurl (Chapter 5) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

Hot hot hot! Seems like Sesshoumaru has a bit of fondness towards Kagome. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the update. 


VS (Chapter 5) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

Oh.My.God. This chapter was so damn hot!!! 

I love how you are able to describe every second of the ecounter so extensive without being boring or repetitive. Your repertoire of adjectives is just amazingly diverse. Well done! It was almost like I was a part of that binding spell!

The small details you put into the story (for example Kagome and Sesshoumaru hugging, or nuzzling) where really nice and kind of romantic. Also that it was Sesshoumaru who had difficulties to stay in character was awesome! I truly think that this detail added to the hotness of this chapter!

You choose the marking (italic) of "special" words wisely and in combination with your usage of ambiguous phrases it had a great impact!

I was hangig on every single word. Just wow. 

 

I'm looking forward to your next update!

 


VS (Chapter 4) - Tue 11 Sep 2018

Hello,

what I really like about this fic is, that it is not just simply sex you are describing. You built all this sex scenes in an actual plot and this fact makes your story very interesting!

All the chapters so far are giving me the impression, that you think things really through! For example your explanation, why a miko and a taijiya have sexual experience or - since chapter 4 hadn't that much plot - the constant reminder through Kikyou and her camera that we are still in the Feudal setting with a film script!

I also like your writing style, it is confident and mature and thus appropriate for this story! Though you seem to love exaggerations...everything is big and heavy and Sango and Kagome are not enough you just put 12 other hot girls into the room and even connect them all together :) I'm sure you would love to be in Sesshoumaru's position wouldn't you ;)

Anyway I'm really curious to see where you will be going with this story! And I'm looking forward to your next update!

P.S. I'm so glad you changed your picture...it was scaring the shit out of me every time I got on you profile!


wonderbug (Chapter 4) - Sat 08 Sep 2018

I bow to your porn-writing talents! Best smut fic I’ve ever read - keep up the fantastic work!!

(Also, if you’re not already a professional writer, you should strongly consider it! You have a truly amazing way with words.)


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 4) - Sun 02 Sep 2018

This story is so well written and I love how you continue to share a technical/set perspective between the actual sex. The use of the seals were very unique and I really like that everyone is so supportive of the other! Also, yay to feudal role play.


Sessygurl (Chapter 4) - Fri 31 Aug 2018

S9 good  you left us wanting more...I'm drolling like Kagome was. Thanks for the update. I'm patiently waiting for more. It's so worth the wait.


Roseanna (Chapter 4) - Fri 31 Aug 2018

Wow, a new chapter posted.  Loved it.  Cannot wait to see the next chapter when Kagome has fun on Sesshomaru! :)


Inuyaoi (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

11 inches.... That is... The sprit is curious but the body is saying get that arm and hammer away from me lmao


Orotami (Chapter 4) - Thu 30 Aug 2018

Mind blowing. Excuse me while... yeah you know. Till next time! 


Lucy Morningstar (Chapter 3) - Sun 25 Feb 2018

Haaa so descriptive and intense! I can't wait for the upcoming climax! Weeehooooo!~ Thank you for writing this!


Mekilicious (Chapter 3) - Sat 17 Feb 2018

Yayyyy! A new chapter!


Sessygurl (Chapter 3) - Fri 16 Feb 2018

I love the detail. It's like I'm reading a romance novel! Thank you for  the update. I cannot wait til the next installment. Especially with the bond created. I wonder if that may make him want to get solely with Kagone.


Roseanna (Chapter 3) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

I read the first two chapters when they came out, and now with Chapter 3 I finally review.  I am loving this story!  It is so different than other Sess/Kag fics I've read, and I am eager to read chapter 4.

P.S.  Somehow, you posted two copies of Chapter 3 in the post.  It seems incredibly long, and that's why.  Thought you'd like to know so you can edit out the extra copy. :)


Cheyanna (Chapter 3) - Thu 15 Feb 2018

I can’t wait to read more!!!! This is so graphic and intense!!!;) 


Lucy Morningstar (Chapter 2) - Sun 26 Nov 2017

O_O

OMG that was so hot, I needed a cold shower! Very realistic and graphic depictions, with 0 fluff, I loike!!! Interesting concept on the contraceptive  sutras and Kagome having that telepathic ability. Wonder with who else will he be paired with? Perhaps a MMF threesome? Keep writing!


Danielle (Chapter 1) - Fri 24 Nov 2017

Live it want more please


Sessygurl (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Oct 2017

Absolutely l love this! The part when Sesshoumaru said, "feel me". Gave me shivers, it was so good. I cannot wait for more.


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