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Mutnodjmet (Chapter 23) - Sat 25 Nov 2017

Very nice ending. Thank you for this story. It was wonderful. Fantastic writing.


KyraTekak (Chapter 22) - Sat 18 Nov 2017

Enjoying the story


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 22) - Fri 17 Nov 2017

Wow...omg. What a mind boggling chapter. You totally bowled me over...I did not expect this could have been Kagome's fate.

I really felt sad for the star-crossed lovers. I am not even going to try to guess their final outcome in the last chapter.

How did you come up with this amazing concept of putting Kagome and Sessho in this whole new and different situation?  As long as I've been reading on this website, I don't think I have ever read anything quite like this before.  It was brilliant and refreshing.

As much as I like my fav FF pairings have a happy ending, which I'm sure can be boring sometimes to other readers, but I am not even going to try and guess what the final chapter entails. Of course, I would like to hope for an optimistic ending, but I have to be realistic. This was a sad tale of ill-fated lovers to begin with. But one can only wish. lol

Beautiful writing job!

Looking forward to the final chapter. I hope you post it soon.


Lonelylulaby (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Nov 2017

Just thought of something, what if this whole collecting sessh's shards is some type of peneance for Kagome. This was her test/quest for her to escape the dark void. Causing me to deep think and look underneath the underneath, hmmmmm.

 

ja for reals


Lonelylulaby (Chapter 20) - Fri 10 Nov 2017

Sorry forgot to review, just took ya cookies without leavin a cent. Anywho, WOW! Just plain WOW, you did it again. So it turns out Sesshoumaru is just a fragment of himself and this one had a connection to the dark void for some reason. I'm really upset that even when all his fragments come together that he will only have 10yrs of life due to those conniving Euliods. Brev, she has spent CENTURIES looking for him just to only have a decade by his whole side T_T ion know how I want to feel. Him die too young and be anguished for all time or some kinda kick ass Kagome magics happen and BAM! he is a regular celestial again. You have been able to make ya audience sit on the edge of their seats cuddos.

 

ja till the next chappie


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 20) - Thu 09 Nov 2017

This chapter was awesome. I am in total agreement with the reviewer (chapter 19) Tana_san of her assessment of the story as a whole. This very well written story has become one of my favs. 

Now, I think I have some understanding of this story but some things that still puzzle me. I don't quite understand how Kagome, being a celestial as believed from chapter two, came to be the Matriarch of the Dark Void with the curse of the Ill Will in her blood and be a celestial at the same time or how Sesshomaur's soul got fragmented? I have a couple of ideas and basically how this story might end but don't want to say anything because I will probably be way out in left field somewhere. LOL

Anyway, I love this story and looking forward to the upcoming chapters and the conclusion because then we will all have the answers to this fascinating story, I hope!  :)

Excellent job!!!

Cheers


Cheyanna (Chapter 20) - Thu 09 Nov 2017

I cant wait to see how awesome the commander is!!!! I love a powerful Kagome! I know that the next chapter is going to be awesome and i cant wait to read it!!! Please update soon!


Tana_san (Chapter 19) - Wed 08 Nov 2017

Though I've always had difficulty understanding these types of stories, this having our favored couple gave way for me to take interest and understanding of what is happening. Yes, your summary at the bottom helped a lot when not knowing the backdrop for the story so for that I am grateful. This is an amazing fic. I can see the effort put into this to put our faved characters into this time period. I give you kudos for this. It' definitely one I will keep and enjoy during those times when writers to the fics I am reading are busy in the real world.

You've done a great job keeping the flow and consistency going and even with typos and small grammatical errors, it never stopped the reading from being anything other than captivating!

I don't know about anyone else but I love that you took Sesshoumaru and Kagome and put them outside of the ordinary universe we are always seeing them in. It is a breath of fresh air so to speak.

JEN


Lonelylulaby (Chapter 19) - Sun 05 Nov 2017

Gaaaaaaah, why is this lifetime so special? Is this gonna be the last one? And now I can see why nobody likes to be summoned or is that because she doesn't know what going on and is unconciously resisting? Also in one of the previous chapters it was mentioned that she could only use one of the powers for a time. Is that because it belonged to one of the old gods/youkai/ect that she ate and isn't really her power to use? She's like Xmens Rogue in a sense.  Also it would seem that Sesshoumaru is a Glutton too. Maybe he's a piece of Kagomes rib, lol, since he's a fragment of a celestial being or the Kami coulda just made him for her but where's he fun in that. This story is really good. Sad it's gonna end soon but all great things and all that jazz.

 

ja me till next time but keep up the great work

 

PS it was me I am the genius that cracked your wonderfully made maze. Good job by the way only took me like 15 chs, lol


Lonelylulaby (Chapter 17) - Tue 31 Oct 2017

Holy fudge,  I don't think Kagoma is a matriarch I think she's the last Glutton.  Cause the matriarch are just able to give birth to the nobles. Their blood has no ill effects. Somehow a very long time ago she got out of the Dark Void and has been rescuing dimensions in search of her soul mate all the while.  I didn't know where in the heck you were going with this story but I decide to stick with it cause it was unique and I'm glad that I did. Even though some of the beast/terms are hard to understand this story has promise. Your mini summaries at the end help a lot too.

 

ja me till next time and keep it the great work

 


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 17) - Sun 29 Oct 2017

Yea I need another chapter. lol thx for updating.


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 16) - Tue 17 Oct 2017

Is it safe to assume that they are in the dark void... but the residents are unaware of this? Is it like Sesshoumaru has already died and Kagome happened across this 'hell' to find him, yet has no recollection? Let me stop guessing. I love this story. Can't wait for the update!


KyraTekak (Chapter 14) - Sun 08 Oct 2017

Great story. Hope for more updates.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 14) - Sun 08 Oct 2017

I forgot to ask, is Sessho and Kagome soul mates or something of that nature? They seem to be connected in some way.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 14) - Sun 08 Oct 2017

Fantastic chapter. You had 7 more updates since I last read this story so I had to start over and read from the beginning again. As I got to where the new updates began from where I orginally left off at chap. 7 I began to understand the story much better. Thanks for the little changes you made, like the small glossary of some of the words and the little summaries at the end of each chapter. I can see where you are taking this story, well at least I am beggining to see where it is going to a point.

So the human nobles are feeding off of Sesshomaru to sustain their life. This makes me wonder why they would need Kagura. I think they might be planning to use her to mate with Sesshomara so they can have pups to continue to feed off their life force to continue to sustaining their own existance because they realize that Sessho is weakening and they need new blood or they could be wanting Kagura as a substitue for him. Well anyway, this is my theory. I am probably way out in left field. Lol  :)

It is so different from anything concerning an alternate universe that I have read thus far. You kept all the key characters from the anime playing in different roles. That was interesting. I am looking forward to the future updates you will post. Great writting and great story.


Cheyanna (Chapter 14) - Sat 07 Oct 2017

Awesome chapter, thanks for the update!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to come! 


Caera (Chapter 14) - Fri 06 Oct 2017

I love the story,it’s riveting.


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 12) - Fri 22 Sep 2017

CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 8) - Wed 20 Sep 2017

Well I guess if I read the author's notes I'd have seen your definitions and things! LMBO! Disregard!


Kagaku-sha (Chapter 10) - Wed 20 Sep 2017

First let me say that this is a really great story from what I've read so far! Very interesting concept and a great 'page turner' (mouse scroller?) I just find myself confused about who's talking (specifically when I see the itallics), what's going on and what certain things mean. I suppose I'm not very familiar with some of the Hebrew words used in the context they're used, and the beings you describe... I'm imagining this is like a fantasy video game universe mixed with some Judaism and your imagination? I'm trying to follow but I find myself re-reading certain paragraphs after moving forward and goinig, "wait what?" lol I think I understand what you're doing with the foreshadowing and what not... so I suppose I should just hold my horses and finish reading what you have and wait for your future updates to serve as explainations...

A glossary of fonts, punctuations and terms at the end or beginning of a chapter would be extremely helpful and allow me to follow much better. I really like the summaries you've done. That has helped clear up a few things for me as well. (My reading comprehension is lacking at 1AM when I'm half sleep but can't stop reading lol! You know how you doze off infront of your laptop... wake back up... fight the sleep... ? No? Just me? Okay lol)

Okay... Happy Humpday!

Great story!


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