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Blommie8 (Chapter 23) - Sun 21 Jan 2018
as usual another great story!!

S4toonee (Chapter 23) - Fri 22 Dec 2017

I loved this story.  The imagery, I thought was great.  It was romance in mythology.


S4toonee (Chapter 23) - Fri 22 Dec 2017

Lady T (Chapter 23) - Sun 10 Dec 2017

AHHHHHHH I FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!! IT WAS AMAZING.  THE PLOT!  THE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!! 

OMG U HAVE A NEW, HUGE, PERMANENT FAN!!!!!!!


Raining Tear Drops (Chapter 23) - Thu 07 Dec 2017

I'm not sure if my first review posted. It iosn't showing up on the review page.

Any way, I posted to thank you for writing a wonderful story. One of the better ones I've read on here in a long time.


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 23) - Tue 05 Dec 2017

Beautiful story! So original and interesting, you are super creative!!!

I love the way you write, you are really talented and I'm always looking forward to reading anything you write!

Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us<3


Kagome_hime (Chapter 23) - Thu 30 Nov 2017

Aww.. such a wonderful story.. very unique .. keep writing 


AngelMomma101 (Chapter 23) - Mon 27 Nov 2017

this was a GREAT story!! yes I had to reread a chapter or two to keep on the page as to what was happening but it was excellently written and was incredibly original. Dont give up after the first few chapters as the ending is completely worth it!


Mio-sama (Chapter 23) - Sun 26 Nov 2017

Wow! Me encanto leer esta histori, estuvo buenísim!

saludos!


KyraTekak (Chapter 23) - Sat 25 Nov 2017

This was a great story.  I really enjoyed it. 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 23) - Sat 25 Nov 2017

Very nice ending. Thank you for this story. It was wonderful. Fantastic writing.


KyraTekak (Chapter 22) - Sat 18 Nov 2017

Enjoying the story


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 22) - Fri 17 Nov 2017

Wow...omg. What a mind boggling chapter. You totally bowled me over...I did not expect this could have been Kagome's fate.

I really felt sad for the star-crossed lovers. I am not even going to try to guess their final outcome in the last chapter.

How did you come up with this amazing concept of putting Kagome and Sessho in this whole new and different situation?  As long as I've been reading on this website, I don't think I have ever read anything quite like this before.  It was brilliant and refreshing.

As much as I like my fav FF pairings have a happy ending, which I'm sure can be boring sometimes to other readers, but I am not even going to try and guess what the final chapter entails. Of course, I would like to hope for an optimistic ending, but I have to be realistic. This was a sad tale of ill-fated lovers to begin with. But one can only wish. lol

Beautiful writing job!

Looking forward to the final chapter. I hope you post it soon.


Lonelylulaby (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Nov 2017

Just thought of something, what if this whole collecting sessh's shards is some type of peneance for Kagome. This was her test/quest for her to escape the dark void. Causing me to deep think and look underneath the underneath, hmmmmm.

 

ja for reals


Lonelylulaby (Chapter 20) - Fri 10 Nov 2017

Sorry forgot to review, just took ya cookies without leavin a cent. Anywho, WOW! Just plain WOW, you did it again. So it turns out Sesshoumaru is just a fragment of himself and this one had a connection to the dark void for some reason. I'm really upset that even when all his fragments come together that he will only have 10yrs of life due to those conniving Euliods. Brev, she has spent CENTURIES looking for him just to only have a decade by his whole side T_T ion know how I want to feel. Him die too young and be anguished for all time or some kinda kick ass Kagome magics happen and BAM! he is a regular celestial again. You have been able to make ya audience sit on the edge of their seats cuddos.

 

ja till the next chappie


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 20) - Thu 09 Nov 2017

This chapter was awesome. I am in total agreement with the reviewer (chapter 19) Tana_san of her assessment of the story as a whole. This very well written story has become one of my favs. 

Now, I think I have some understanding of this story but some things that still puzzle me. I don't quite understand how Kagome, being a celestial as believed from chapter two, came to be the Matriarch of the Dark Void with the curse of the Ill Will in her blood and be a celestial at the same time or how Sesshomaur's soul got fragmented? I have a couple of ideas and basically how this story might end but don't want to say anything because I will probably be way out in left field somewhere. LOL

Anyway, I love this story and looking forward to the upcoming chapters and the conclusion because then we will all have the answers to this fascinating story, I hope!  :)

Excellent job!!!

Cheers


Cheyanna (Chapter 20) - Thu 09 Nov 2017

I cant wait to see how awesome the commander is!!!! I love a powerful Kagome! I know that the next chapter is going to be awesome and i cant wait to read it!!! Please update soon!


Tana_san (Chapter 19) - Wed 08 Nov 2017

Though I've always had difficulty understanding these types of stories, this having our favored couple gave way for me to take interest and understanding of what is happening. Yes, your summary at the bottom helped a lot when not knowing the backdrop for the story so for that I am grateful. This is an amazing fic. I can see the effort put into this to put our faved characters into this time period. I give you kudos for this. It' definitely one I will keep and enjoy during those times when writers to the fics I am reading are busy in the real world.

You've done a great job keeping the flow and consistency going and even with typos and small grammatical errors, it never stopped the reading from being anything other than captivating!

I don't know about anyone else but I love that you took Sesshoumaru and Kagome and put them outside of the ordinary universe we are always seeing them in. It is a breath of fresh air so to speak.

JEN


Lonelylulaby (Chapter 19) - Sun 05 Nov 2017

Gaaaaaaah, why is this lifetime so special? Is this gonna be the last one? And now I can see why nobody likes to be summoned or is that because she doesn't know what going on and is unconciously resisting? Also in one of the previous chapters it was mentioned that she could only use one of the powers for a time. Is that because it belonged to one of the old gods/youkai/ect that she ate and isn't really her power to use? She's like Xmens Rogue in a sense.  Also it would seem that Sesshoumaru is a Glutton too. Maybe he's a piece of Kagomes rib, lol, since he's a fragment of a celestial being or the Kami coulda just made him for her but where's he fun in that. This story is really good. Sad it's gonna end soon but all great things and all that jazz.

 

ja me till next time but keep up the great work

 

PS it was me I am the genius that cracked your wonderfully made maze. Good job by the way only took me like 15 chs, lol


Lonelylulaby (Chapter 17) - Tue 31 Oct 2017

Holy fudge,  I don't think Kagoma is a matriarch I think she's the last Glutton.  Cause the matriarch are just able to give birth to the nobles. Their blood has no ill effects. Somehow a very long time ago she got out of the Dark Void and has been rescuing dimensions in search of her soul mate all the while.  I didn't know where in the heck you were going with this story but I decide to stick with it cause it was unique and I'm glad that I did. Even though some of the beast/terms are hard to understand this story has promise. Your mini summaries at the end help a lot too.

 

ja me till next time and keep it the great work

 


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