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Purple Rain (Chapter 32) - Thu 17 Jan 2019

I'm sorry if it seems like I'm seeking attention. But I give credit where it's due and I'm also big enough to apologize if I'm wrong. Trinity 3000 I want to retract the portion of my previous review regarding the letter. Initially reading it it did sound kind of rude to me but after reading it myself I realized that you were correct that it wasn't that bad. So  for that I apologize. That being said, the rest of my review stands. Thank you for your time and I hope to continue readin,g this story along with you and the many other readers.

~PR~


Purple Rain (Chapter 32) - Thu 17 Jan 2019

I want to address the comment that Trinity 3,000 made. Firstly, yeah she was lied to her whole life but based on what I'm reading Sesshomaru was not made aware of the stipulation of the treaty nor the soulmate determination as he disliked humans from the get go.

 

Secondly, he didn't lie to her because what he told her and the monk was technically true. He simply let them draw their own conclusions. The monks didn't need to know his true relationship with her if it would cause peace between the two factions. If you want to nit pick, he was the ONLY one WILLING to tell her the truth at that point and the only reason he didn't was because they got interrupted and then she stormed off repeating her mother's mistake. So the idiocy has spun full circle. Didn't he reveal his true self to her? He didn't have to do any of that.

 

I'm not saying she has no right to upset but she didn't know that he lied for sure. She had one version of the story from her father and ran with it. Emotions will run high for anyone under those circumstances but she just met him and he got more credibility than her own mother, whose motives she didn't know.  So no, Sesshomaru was not being a jerk. 

 

Also, to address your comment about the letter. Reread it and see if it was not rude from the point of view of a society that prides honor and respect. She is learning Japanese and though most people with no or limited knowledge of the culture would google something about the culture, she didn't before drafting the letter. Even with modern stereotypes of the culture, the basics, are that Asians pride respect and honor. You can't tell me she was raised on a shrine with a monk grandfather and not even know that much... I'm sorry but your case holds no weight. 


Purple Rain (Chapter 32) - Thu 17 Jan 2019

Thank you for updating and I'm so proud of how you handled Sesshomaru's response to Kagome's words and actions. I really like that his response mirrors her mother's responses eerily. Too often she tends to get away with quite a lot of hypocritical Behavior and lashing out and he always has to take it in those other stories. This response feels more organic to his character. Thank you for keeping him in character by the way. I'm glad that they're not afraid to put her mistakes back up in her face so that she can actually take a look at it instead of taking her sweet time to come around to the conclusions that need to be addressed. I am a fan of Kagome but sometimes I wish that the relationship is of equal. Not just him putting up with her until she can behave or her doing the same for him. So again kudos on this story and I can't  wait to see where you take this. Please keep up the good work

~PR~


Orotami (Chapter 32) - Thu 17 Jan 2019

Damn Kagome. What a bitch move. He saves your ass and you snap! Ouch. This was painful to read. 


trinity3000 (Chapter 31) - Thu 17 Jan 2019

I am really enjoying the story so far.  My only worry is that Sesshomaru is going to swoop in like a white night to save the day and all is going to be forgiven.

 

So far, poor Kagome has really been given the short end of the stick.  She was lied to he whole life.  Then she gets a pen pal that is a jerk.(Her 1st letter was not that bad.  His letter bumped things up to downright rude.)  Although he was nice to her when she came to Japan, he was lying and using her for his own gain.  While that was going on, her powers tied them together without her permission.

 

If he just shows up and all is forgiven and happily ever after, I will be disappointed.  It would be so unfair.  Why would she have to endure all the suffering and he just gets his way.  I so hope you are going to put him through some of his own trials.

 

Thank you for continuing to post so often.


kels (Chapter 31) - Wed 16 Jan 2019

I love love love this story !!! Keep it coming !!! 


Orotami (Chapter 31) - Wed 16 Jan 2019

Gold star plus 50 points! Update really soon and it will be gold star x 25 because you gave us a shitty ass cliff to hang off of. Way to make us slam on our brakes! 


Fluffy Kitty (Chapter 31) - Wed 16 Jan 2019

I love this story. I just started reading it and I am on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter. I too love the last sentence in this chapter. It just makes you want to sigh dreamily after reading it. 


Orotami (Chapter 30) - Wed 16 Jan 2019

This story is has a passionate, thriving, enchanting plor. I've read chapters 1-30 this evening and couldn't stop reading! I look forward to the next chapter and really hope Kagome gets herself on a plane. The depth of your plot is fascinating and I'm exciting for what will happen next! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 30) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

Well, I am all caught up! Wow! Drama! On all sides. Looking forward to the next chapter! Cheers!


KShadeslady (Chapter 26) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

Oh misunderstandings!! I’m guessing all that her mother told her has her running like a scared rabbit! What will he do to win her over?


KShadeslady (Chapter 22) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

Just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying this wonderful story. im very glad that you started updating it again. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 20) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

Ask and you shall receive...background story. I’m guessing her real father has his suspicions and that’s why he was so cordial. This has been such an interesting story. Thanks so much. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 19) - Tue 15 Jan 2019

I had to go back and refresh my memory. How very interesting. I’m looking forward to finding out why her family kept this information from her. Nice chapter. 


Gee (Chapter 29) - Mon 14 Jan 2019

Binged read this and I can't wait for more chapters! 


Lorena (Chapter 29) - Sun 13 Jan 2019

I feel like such a dick, but I'm so pleased with this chapter! I didn't really wish bad things for Inuyasha and Kikyo, but it seemed so easy that it was almost superficial...I'm glad that if they manage to sort themselves out, it'll be at a better level. ON TO MY FAVORITE COUPLE, I guess there really isn't anything Sesshomaru can do but wait. I know that things aren't cleared up completely on Kagomes side, mainly because if it were Kikyo would know the specifics of her disagreement with their mom- it wouldn't be right for anyone to be left in the dark... How drastic will Kagome change? I hope not at all- I dont know if there are demons in California, but the thought that she'd see what she hadn't before can be shocking and I hope she can lean on Seshomaru soon 


Lorena (Chapter 28) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

New reader here! I had to binge on it before I reviewed and I'm glad I did.  I was really feeling Kagome and Sesshomaru,  it's crazy how natural they seemed to be with eachother, but now I'm worried that this craziness will pressure them to something they hadn't imagined before. I feel really bad for Sesshomaru,  will Kagome realize that Sesshomaru didn't know about this situation until after she left? It's crazy to think how coincidental this all was, but because of how intertwined they turned out to be it's easy to forget that Sesshomaru had no idea she was coming and more importantly,  who she was when this assignment started and up until then...I am SO EXCITED to read what's next for these lovely soulmates in the upcoming chapters :]


Krista (Chapter 28) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

DAMN! I don't even know where to begin. The intrigue, the mystery. I'm excited to read more lol and I hope your Muse treats you well. 


nicole (Chapter 27) - Sat 12 Jan 2019

He should write her a letter of his foolishness


Doug (Chapter 27) - Fri 11 Jan 2019

I think Kagome should have directed her anger and disappointment toward Sesshoumaru's father and her mother. Her mother is the one who lied to her since birth. Why would she assume that Sesshoumaru knew of the arranged marriage? She just jumped to the conclusion.

 

Her mother is the biggest liar and manipulator in this tale. She did not want her daughter to be in an arranged marriage so she told her husband the kid is dead, fled the country and kept lying to her children. If I were Kagome, I would cut off ties with that woman. 


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