Reviews for Curse by Kirai

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KyraTekak (Chapter 19) - Sun 06 Aug 2017

Hope for more updates. Great story


kyoandyuya (Chapter 19) - Tue 04 Nov 2014

A cliffhanger!!!!!! No way!!!! Please update soon!


Margarida (Chapter 19) - Sat 05 Apr 2014

So there are side effects to this curse hum? 

Can't wait to read more! 

thank you for charing with us <3 


zandria (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Jan 2012

this story is so amazing i can't wait for the next update :)


zandria (Chapter 19) - Fri 11 Nov 2011

i soooooo love this story :)


Alexandra (Chapter 19) - Thu 29 Sep 2011

Awesome story! I can't wait for the next update! I wonder if this is part of the curse? It probably is. I wonder when Inuyasha comes into the picture. It'll be interesting to read how he reacts to being a daddy. XD


Kae (Chapter 19) - Wed 28 Sep 2011
OH! I understand now! What a NASTY curse! Poor Kagome. Poor Midoriko. Thier loves must be so confused! How is Sesshoumaru going to fix this?

Kitsune Diva (Chapter 19) - Sun 25 Sep 2011

I love your story. It is very well written.  I can not help, but want more.  I love how the curse on Kagome has more than one layer to it.  I also like the other things taking place with the other characters.  I find this story to be well rounded in its sense of developement.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 19) - Sat 24 Sep 2011

@_@ midoriko made her crazy? thats not very nice :[


bori_Boo (Chapter 18) - Tue 02 Nov 2010

Sweetiie ur storie is amazing ....I lOVE your storie .....YOU ROCK!


SashaMarie (Chapter 18) - Sat 09 Oct 2010

I love the twist you put in this chapter. I cant wait to see what Sesshoumaru's reaction is going to be with Kagome running away from him. It was great. I cant wait to read more. Please update soon. Thanks


Kae (Chapter 18) - Wed 29 Sep 2010

HUH?! What the heck? What happened to Kagome? I'm so confused! Does this have to do with the curse?

On a side note, about 3/4 of the way down, while I was reading, I noticed that one of the paragraphs is all messed up. it was confusing for a bit. try fixing it.

great story by the way. very inventive.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 18) - Mon 27 Sep 2010

mmmk

this confused me:

Empathy welled in Kagome. She reached out and held the wolf demon as she began to sob. Letting out all the bottled emotion she hadn’t wanted to let out.

Sesshomaru.

Kagome reached out for her mate. She needed his reassurance and comfort. Nothing came.

“There you go. No more tears. Inuyasha is an idiot. But at least you have something good to come out of it. Your baby. If you don’t want to Inuyasha never has to know. It can be just Kagome reached out for her mate. She needed his reassurance and comfort. Nothing came.

“There you go. No more tears. Inuyasha is an idiot. But at least you have something good to come out of it. Your baby. If you don’t want to Inuyasha never has to know. It can be just yours you know. A piece of yourself.”

 

And so did the end. Who was she running from, wasn't it Sess that was holding her? wth! *wiggles update bribery c0okie at you*


SashaMarie (Chapter 17) - Tue 14 Sep 2010

I love this story so far. Please update soon. I cant wait to see what happens next. I hope that when Sango and Miroku tell Kagome and Sesshoumaru about the curse it does not effect their relationship. I hope that they can find a way to break the curse and fall in love for real. Anyways great job so far. I simply love this story.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 17) - Sun 12 Sep 2010

LMAO he's so not good a subtle =x aweosme update! smut in a hall<3


Kitty (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Sep 2010

More please!!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 17) - Sat 11 Sep 2010

OH MY!!! Ayame finally shows up at Sesshomaru's castle. I can't wait to see when she finds out that Sesshomaru's mate is actually Kagome. I wonder what's going to happen when Inuyasha finds out he got Ayame pregnant. I bet he'll blame Kagome for everything. Ooooh, so excited for this one. Love, love, love!


Lady Serianna (Chapter 1) - Tue 07 Sep 2010

I'm sorry I forgot to review the first time around, but anyway I love it! I bet you could turn this into an actual book if you put your own characters in it and changed it just a bit like take out all the Inuyasha bits. Sorry I'm not all that great at putting my thoughts into words; thats part of the reason why I have trouble writing anything longer than a one shot. Sorry I believe I'm rambling. Well anyway I love the plot, the whole story :). Can't wait for the next chapter!


Sakuramaru (Chapter 16) - Mon 06 Sep 2010

WOW.  This is one of the best storylines I have read in a while!  If I may offer a teeny critique though...for a plot this involved, it seems that the story is moving too fast...I know how it is when you want to get your ideas down fast enough so you don't forget them, but in my opinion, (and that's all this is, an OPINION), it's almost as if you're giving us a brief overview of the story. 

But I really and truly love this.  I love how you are telling both Midoriko's story and Kagome's at the same time, and the Inuyasha/Ayame thing...refreshing! 

Thank you Kirai!  Please, keep up the good work!

Sakuramaru

 

P.S. - I thank R0o-chan for getting me here...she suggested your story as a great one to read, and she was right! :)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 16) - Mon 06 Sep 2010

oh noes! the bond is gone b/c of the bebe? or maybe its b/c soon the female pains start in so the bond is weak. !@! *wiggles update bribery c0okie at you* that was a good update btw!


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