| Like OMG Rin is cute.   She may not have said anything but still - cute!!   Will Shippo come into play in this story? I really hope that the youkai in the cage from chapter 1 wasn't him... I would be so so sad.....   Still a great story, though! I like that Jaken is civil - but I have a feeling that Kags will mention the cold atmosphere of the home and how that would not help Rin in the long run.   Can't wait for the next update!!    
 | I am excited to read more. You've done such a great job of defining Kagome's character and background effectively and quickly without it feeling rushed. I am completely hooked. Thanks for dedicating your time to writing for this fandom!      
 | This is absolutely amazing. Your writing is perfect and your storytelling is wonderful. The plot is original and riveting. I don't find many stories on here that really toss into my face that they are amazin af. Yours does.   I cannot wait for a new chapter! Great work!!    
 | I'm your huge fan, really!!! Since "The light at the end", which is my most favorite so far, I've waiting for you next work. And here is it, I love it so much much, I can't wait till Sesshoumaru appear!! Thanks for your hard work and please, update soon!!!    
 
Lynn (Chapter 1) - Wed 26 Apr 2017 | Does Sesshomaru get to keep his eye and his hand? :P   Very interesting spin on a wonderful book. I look forward to more.    
 
xDori (Chapter 1) - Wed 26 Apr 2017 | Ahhhhhhh! I love it. Can't wait for the next one :)    
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