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Mutnodjmet (Chapter 30) - Sat 23 Sep 2017

I am trully amazed at the way chapters 29 and 30 turned out. They were brilliantly written.  I am  so looking forward to the last two chapters of this fantastic story.

I would never had crossed my mind that it would have taken Kagome's death to break Sessho's curse. I find that very curious and interesting because it was the twist in the plot...very good. I can't wait to see what Sessho has in store for Jaken and how he will snivel his way out of this cause Sessho is so pissed off at him.

Excellent writing job.


Annie (Chapter 30) - Tue 19 Sep 2017

Yes they finally mated. I am so happy for Sesshomaru and Kagome. I was surprised that Inuyasha had submitted to his brother. I hope that he grows up and stop being a fool. He had his chance and he blew it all away. I totally forgotten about Jaken. I wonder what will Sesshomaru do to him when they return to the castle. Superb job with this story.


Melissa Fizz (Chapter 29) - Tue 12 Sep 2017

I just wanted to let you know that I am a big fan of your stories and very much enjoy reading them. Thank you for taking the time to write these wonderful stories.


Annie (Chapter 29) - Tue 12 Sep 2017

WOW!!!!!!!. I  did not see this coming. Naraku got exactly what he deserved. I did not expect Kagome to die and come back because she figured out how to make Sesshomaru normal again.  You had so many surprises in this story that I actually jumped up and down with excitement. I still do not trust Inuyasha. I think he is up to something.  I hope he get his butt whipped again by both Sesshomaru and Kagome. Awesome story.


FireDragon (Chapter 28) - Tue 12 Sep 2017

awesome I am sure between sessie and Kags that they can finally defeat Naraku.  then to see about the curse.  : ) looking forward to more.  and hoping it will come soon. thanks for sharing.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 28) - Tue 12 Sep 2017

Awesome chapter. It seems that Sessho and Kagome came with an idea to finally break the cursed spell. I hope Inuyasha really gets what is coming to him for what he did to Kagome's well. That was just low down and dirty. He does not deserve to live, if he is allowed to live then he should get something that he will never forget for the rest of his life but of course the chapter is most likely already written and my rants are just empty rants.

 Jaken...Jaken...Jaken that little swarmy coward. He better hope nobody saw him slither away and besides how is he going to explain himself to Sessho when he comes back to the shiro and finds Jaken there without a scratch on himself, also how would he explain that he was no where around during and after the battle.

 Excellently written and looking forward to the other chapters to come. Great job!!!


KyraTekak (Chapter 28) - Mon 11 Sep 2017

Getting good. Sounds like Sesshomaru broke the spell 


Annie (Chapter 28) - Mon 11 Sep 2017

Amazing. Simply Amazing.  I truly enjoyed the battle scenes. I hate that Inuyasha had destroyed the well. Jaken is such a coward. I hope that Sesshomaru deals with him. I can't wait for the next update.


Annie (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Sep 2017

I'm glad that Sesshomaru and Kagome both discussed what was truly bothering them. Kagome with her changes and Sesshomaru with being small. They both are willing to help each other with there problem before they mate. I do not like Inuyasha. I can't wait until he gets whats coming to him.  You are doing a good job with this story.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 27) - Tue 05 Sep 2017

Fantastic chapter! Iam so happy that Sessho Kagome has finally confessed their feelings for each other and that was all that they needed to hear from each other make their love stronger and even more powerful for each other. A love so powerful can make them over come any obstacle thrown their to protect what's theirs and each other, this includes their packs. Once they are able to mate then the pack becomes as one and Kagome will have her Shippo back and the kids will become a real family.

As for Inuyasha, his ao called plans always seem to fail and this one he is planning now is not going to be any different. He watched and saw how powerful Kagome has become plus has Sessho on her side yet he still thinks he will be able to make her submit to him and mate him...what a joke and an idiot. Hopefully the plan for the well falls through and she will still be able to get through to her home with Sessho.  Whatever dark magic that he learned from Kikyo should fail because Kagome is more powerful than Kikyo ever was which should null and void what magic she taught Inuyasha.  Can't wait to see the look on his face...lol

Say for argument sake, what if Inuyasha got his way what makes him think he would be able to control Kagome as powerful as she has become? Just throwing that out for shits and giggles.

Well cindygirl, another great chapter excellently well written. Waiting for that special magical chapter when Sessho gets his size back finally. Update soon and thank you for posting a wonderful story.


Randy simons (Chapter 26) - Fri 01 Sep 2017

Great story you need to update it and finish it I'm anxious to see how it ends


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 26) - Thu 31 Aug 2017

Awesome chapters both 25 and 26. Kagome kicked some major asses with those wolves and Kouga. So there really wasn't really anything wrong with Kouga other than he let the evilness of the jewel take over him and he just wanted more power. Too bad he had to pay for it with his life. I don't think Kagome is going to mourn over his death because she had warned him many times about calling her his woman and she was getting sick of it. I don't blame her one bit. She is a changed woman and she his powerful and she means business.

Like she told the wolves that there is only one male that she would submit to and that is her god Sesshomaru.  It is too bad that Sessho cannot go back to his castle just yet because that would be a perfect place for both his and her pack could rest up and be safe for a while especially from baka Inuyasha. Since he thinks that  they would be heading back to Edo, Sessho's castle would be the place to be because the packs and Inuyasha would be going in opposite directions and he would be surprised when he got to Edo and the packs were not there; that would piss him even more, LOL.

I must say your fight scenes were awesome like the rest of your story. When will Sessho get back to his normal size? Soon I hope. If he has to wait until Naraku has to die for the spell to be broken like Miroko...that is way too long to wait. In the next chapter, you said that words of comfort will be spoken between Kagome and Sessho in the real world, does this mean that they confess their feelings for one another finally?

I can't imagine what Inuyasha is planning to make Kagome weak enough  so he can try to make her submit to him and make her his mate. I hope whatever it is that it fails big time. He is as big of a coward as Jaken is. What makes Inuyasha thinks that he deserves Kagome all of a sudden? Is it because he realizes that she was more powerful than Kikyo and he rejected Kagome then finds out the big mistake he made in choosing the wrong woman but still thinks that he still has a right to her anyway. That's how stupid he really is.

I am so looking forward to more updates soon. Fantastic writing.

 


Annie (Chapter 26) - Wed 30 Aug 2017

WOW!!!!. I did not see this coming. Kagome did great battling Koga. I hate that she got hurt because she let her guard down.

Please update soon.


FireDragon (Chapter 26) - Wed 30 Aug 2017

It is too bad she killed Koga she will be sad about that later I imagine.  though I hoped he would snap out of it once the jewel shards were gone. Also, is Inuyasha going to go through and get her family? That is all I can think of that he would  be thinking. Shame on him. I really hoped that when Kikio died and her spell on him wore off that Inuyasha would be better still a bit of a dick like he sometimes is. but not so much so. He should remember how he acted and be ashamed of himself. but I guess that isn't the direction you are taking this. either way I am looking forward to more and hoping for more soon. thanks for sharing looking forward to the next update. especially to when Sesshou gets big again.


FireDragon (Chapter 25) - Wed 23 Aug 2017

excellent chapter.  I am so much looking forward to the next one. wishing for more soon. thanks again.


Annie (Chapter 25) - Wed 23 Aug 2017

This chapter was freaking amazing. You go Kagome.


roberta. (Chapter 25) - Wed 23 Aug 2017

Great chap looking forward to seeing next one.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 24) - Sat 19 Aug 2017

Wow I love how Kagome took take care of Inuyasha, she kicked ass. Of course he is not going to give up so I think she might have to take him out. She has already warned him that she might kill him if he comes back.

I wish that Sessho just go ahead and tell Kagome how he feels about her and of what his plans for their future. He told her in the dream realm. Just because he is small does not make any difference and he should know it will make Kagome feel good and give her hope. I think he is letting his pride get in the way...now that is being selfish.

Excellent chapter. Looking forward to more chapters soon.


Annie (Chapter 24) - Fri 18 Aug 2017

WOW! WOW! WOW!. I am so happy for Kagome. She is such a fierce Alpha. I am glad that she told Inuyasha that he is no longer welcome in their pack. It served him right. He was never a true Alpha only a selfish man who only thought of himself. I'm glad that she doesn't  trust him. I can't wait for the next chapter.  You are an amazing writer. Please update when you have the chance.


Lauren (Chapter 11) - Tue 15 Aug 2017

The concept of this story is great, and the characterizations are only a little exaggerated (for the type of story this is), but the story definitely needs to be proof read. Your tense usage is off, and there are several portions of the story, so far, where the reader can tell that you jotted down notes but forgot to insert dialogue in the plac of the notes once you began writing.


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