i like the idea but i am a little confused as to how where and why. Also you have some grammar issues and a couple of the sentences are a little confusing.Not that i am one to talk my beta does wonders for me. Shes practically divine. But for a one shot the mystery and description were well done. And i liked the idea though i do the urge to follow them and see where they are going. But i understand it is a one shot. :)