I think this is a great story the interactions between the characters is interesting can't wait for more chapters
i can understand her shock, but really...did she suppose a concubine would be exclusive? Yes, she is young. Very nice update. I loved all the mental imagery here. Thanks for a lovely long chapter. Looking forward to that coming meeting.
I cannot wait to see Sesshoumarus reaction. He obviously wants to tame her, to shut her up but he also has his pride. Did Sesshoumaru shar Izayoi? Probably unlikely, since she was a human. As far as Kimiko is concerned I think she might have been jealous for the fact she did not get to choose Izayoi for Toga? Does she get a harem too?
(Chapter 13) - Fri 31 Mar 2017
Ah I love it! Cant wait until your next update! I'm really wondering how this could ever turn out truly beneficial for Kagome. She may fall in love with Sess, but he has to have an heir with a different woman.... hmmmm
Remember, apostrophes aren't optional. I think you'll find that more people will read and review this if the first few lines of just the pre-chapter had proper punctuation. Nice idea. Keep writing.
So glad you decided to update! Great chapter, waiting for some fluffff
Very nice chapter and just the right amount of spice. Don't apologise for not writing lemons every chapter. I prefer the buildup and maybe just a bit of heat. That was quite sensual.
(Chapter 1) - Mon 06 Mar 2017
Thank you so much DarkR0ze for your review I have currently finished editing the story. I have refined the chapters individually I did find that they were lacking in description. This is my first story so as I re read the chapters I make changes it is not the final product. My updates hence forth would not be as frequent Ive decided to dedicate the time to proof read and create more intricate sceneres.
I am not able to message everyone that had read my story individually so I hope that this response here will be seen
I will advise everyone that had read the story thus far to re read the chapters as they have been updated as of today. Longer paragraphs were added and more details it should dimish any confusion or further queries. Thank you all
To make corrections, read from the last sentence to the first. Watch out for the use of qoutation marks, and spellings.
Let the characters' personality take over, if you 'hear' your characters wanting to do or say something then make some leeway for them to happen.
Kagome is good with both the emperor and prince.
This is a rather nice read, although short chapters, but entertaining altogether. I'll wait paitently for another chapter. c:
More revelations and intrigues. Nice chapter. Question...You use the word jaden. Is there a difference between jade and jaden? Just curious. Cheers!
(Chapter 10) - Wed 01 Mar 2017
Ogni capitolo diventa piu interessante, e mi piace tantissimo come le cose vanno fra Kagome e Toga .Perché solo Sessomaru deve andare con tutte anche Kagome si può divertire.
(Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Feb 2017
Okay....soooo~ If Touga might get Kagome and maybe Sesshomaru....or just Touga. I just want to say I have no objection to this. Btw, keep up the good work. I hope you continue to update.
(Chapter 10) - Tue 28 Feb 2017
Ah, I wish these chapters were longer! I like where this is going. Thank you for updating so quickly!! This sory is wonderful!
Very nice chapter. Lots of secrets going on her. That place is a hive of activity. Yeah, I'm thinking Kimiko had much to do with Izayoi's death. Watch out Kikyo.
Loving your updates. Hmmm, She can repay him with food she cooked, she can show off her sword/arrow/hrseback riding skils if she has any. Singing, painting ect.
I loved every moment of that one. Poor Sesshoumaru trying to get out his frustration. I wonder what he will think when Kagome rejects him. However, then again lets see how long he can hold out to his beast. I loved Touga's character too.
I am loving where this story is going. I already have a feeling I will be looking forward to each update! You still have some minor grammatical errors but that's okay! Please update soon!
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