Reviews for Law of the Land by Suchiko

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InuKami-Sama (Chapter 4) - Sun 05 Feb 2017

Yes my wish came true! I didnt have to wait till friday for an update!!! :D woohooo ...all i need now are longer chapters pleeeaassee


Karichan (Chapter 4) - Sun 05 Feb 2017

This is such an interesting story!  I like how you're working the plot and the characters!


Buttercream (Chapter 4) - Sun 05 Feb 2017

Yay an update.Kagome misses Rin. Rin wants the only mother that she knows. I sure hopes Sesshomaru has a heart and let them two see each other.

 


Loveyaa (Chapter 3) - Sat 04 Feb 2017

Hmm...that didn't seem legit at all. and if Kagome has legitimate adoption papers that also makes that whole process even fishier. It's an interesting tale though and I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome and Sesshoumaru go toe to toe :)


Nenyanna (Chapter 3) - Fri 03 Feb 2017

OMG - I love the premise... the legal complications give me hope she might be able to negotiate some form of shared custody, but at the same time the demon pack element might override the law.  

More please!


Buttercream (Chapter 3) - Fri 03 Feb 2017

WOW!!!! I am feeling sorry for Kagome. What is she going to do. I am not liking Sesshomaru right now.


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 3) - Fri 03 Feb 2017

Ugghh why sooo long for the next chapter????? Please can i just have the next one? And can they be longer? Pretty please with a cherry on top?? 


Ree-san (Chapter 3) - Fri 03 Feb 2017

I know that Kagome has never considered that Kagura was shady and has her own agenda. That she was a party to severe harm to Sesshomaru and keeping a pup from her parent. Very interested on whether she is genuinely sorry in a way that shows through her behavior or if she is holier than thou, which she can certainly be at times. It'd be hard to hold parenting struggles against Sesshomaru seeing how he has missed years of Rin's life because he was a victim of a crime. Looking forward to how Kagome reacts. I can't imagine someone stealing years with my kids from me...


Natalia (Chapter 1) - Fri 03 Feb 2017

This is good. thanks for updating!  but please could kagome find something that will give her some leverage or weight or benefits?  it's so unfair that he will presumably win the case and the law is against her can't she find something?  and poor her cuffed just for this? it was too much and over the top. just because a rich man was there and a few strong youkai. afraid of a weak human female so they needed to restrain her? nonsense! she us not yet guilty even if they believe si! thx for the chapter!  will wait for more! 


Mona (Chapter 3) - Fri 03 Feb 2017

I hope this isn't going to portray Kagome as pathetic and weak like most fanfics.  Hopefully you will grant her custody of Rin and Sesshoumaru visita rights.  I'm just tired of reading Sesshoumaru win all the tim, just because he has money and is a Lord.


Elizabeth (Chapter 2) - Mon 30 Jan 2017

Oh my gosh! Intense! Friday won't come soon enough; I need drama and resolution! (I can't believe I'm asking for drama... I usually don't, but this is so good!) I can't wait for you to update! :D 


Buttercream (Chapter 2) - Fri 27 Jan 2017

Noooooo!!  Please update soon.  I can't wait to see what happens next


NellyWhirl (Chapter 2) - Fri 27 Jan 2017

I am quite enjoying your story.


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 2) - Fri 27 Jan 2017

Awww i have to wait a whooolllleee week for the next chapter???uuggh Lol


Elizabeth (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jan 2017

Oh, this looks like it will be interesting. Looking forward to your next update!


Buttercream (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jan 2017

WOW.  This is quite interesting. Please update soon.


Victoria (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jan 2017

This is really good, found it by accident, the summary caught my attention. Sad that Kagome lost her son, almost had me crying ???? Can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work. ^.^


Lady Amalthea (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Jan 2017

I'll be looking for updates, very good, thought the part where Kagome lost her son, thoght something a little more sinister was implied.  Nce beginning


Mia (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Jan 2017

Welcome back!! That was quite an interesting beginning, especially with that title. I wonder what the law is and what kind of conflict will it create. I really look forward to next chapter.

 


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