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Kanda (Chapter 6) - Fri 24 Feb 2017

you don't... you don't overdose on weed, though...


Kanda (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Feb 2017

the beginning of this was cute, omg.

 

when you say tragedy.... *squint suspiciously* i'm not gonna end up crying out of heartbreak in the end, am i...? 


KShadeslady (Chapter 5) - Wed 22 Feb 2017

Is that the end? Will there be more? That was delightful. OC but funny and fun!


KShadeslady (Chapter 3) - Wed 22 Feb 2017

Just having fun with this story. 


KShadeslady (Chapter 1) - Wed 22 Feb 2017

Oh my goodness! Yes the Characters are both OC but this may prove to be very funny Indeed. I love funny. 


Victoria (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 Feb 2017

This is what happens when you sucked into a new story, you have to wait for the next chapters and it's just so hard to do, your on the edge of your seat 'what happens next, I must know!' Well that's how I think about it anyway. Keep up the good work, love the story and the new chapters and the development of their relationship. ^.^


wiccawoman (Chapter 5) - Sat 28 Jan 2017

Love this story! Can't wait to read the next chapter!     :)


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 5) - Sat 28 Jan 2017

This was a very interesting chapter. You did nicely for just writing the chapter in such short amount time and then post it too.

Both Kagome and Sessho are acting rather wierdly and just so OOC. If they are mates, would they not feel each others feelings like when Kagome felt Sessho's over whelming sadness and vice versa, they should be feeling each other's feelings when they are close to each other and the babies would be acting excited when they are near their father. The way Kagome broke it off with Sesshomaru was a bit unneccessarily cruel doing it through a text telling him there was no passion between them. They both should have been going through some form of mating pangs because they are not around each other enough, especially if she is changing.

The other thing is, unless I missed it, why was Sessho not wearing his markings and where was his beast. Sessho just gives up too easily and basically let certain people push him around like Kagome making rules and demands of him and him wimping out.

Well anyway, I'm sure you will have all the answers in your next chapter, I hope...this Sesshomaru is frustrating me out. lol

I love the story and keep doing the wonderful writing that you are doing. I am looking forward to the next chapter.


Toni (Chapter 5) - Fri 27 Jan 2017

really enjoyed this chapter   can't wait for the next one


Arielle (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Jan 2017

It's a good story it needs a bit of formatting. For instance when the characters speak you should start a new sentence.

 

"I am going to name one of the twins Abigail." Kagome said

Sesshomaru tensed and replied, "I don't know if I like that name since it was a character in your last erotic novel." 

"Why?"

"It was the book that helped you get into your current state." He answered. I think you get the idea.

 

Also try to get into the mind of the character because some of their responses are too obvious. Sessh is a fighter and a dog characteristic is stubbornness. He's a bit flat.


natalia (Chapter 5) - Fri 27 Jan 2017

I like it and thx for updating but please! Please use you're instead of 'your' for every form you are yours or other. Please! I like it and sorry to be a bother but it makes me cringe and ruins the flow of reading! Please don't be mad at me. I understand it may be easier but it's bugging me! Thx in advance! Take care!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Sat 14 Jan 2017

This story is very interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!


snow (Chapter 3) - Sat 14 Jan 2017

interesting story! i will add it to my favorites and keep following the progress.


Alashia (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Jan 2017

Can't wait to see what happens when they meet. Great story so far! Hope you will update soon.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Jan 2017

Very nice chapter, well written and humerous too. 

Some men are so dense and it seems Touga and Sessho fall in that catagory somewhat. They should have started at the bottom first; it probably could have saved them some time searrching. I usually start at the bottom first myself because it always seems to work for me most of the time....that's how my luck runs....lol.  I was surprised that InuKimi did not sense that Kagome's babies were demonic when she touched her stomach or maybe felt a familiar aura coming from her. Well, at least they finally found the right person. Now that she is four and half months, hopefully Sessho gets to find and aquaints himself with her before the babies are born at least.

I hope you are feeling much better than before and maybe get some much needed sleep as time goes by. I just got home from having an Endoscopy procedure a half an hour ago and the first thing I did was get on my computer to check for your story and was excited when it was posted...yaaah!

Looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent job!


Izzy (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

Very interesting!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

This story is coming together nicely. Sessho seems to be finally getting it together. I loved the part with the conversation he has with his parents, especially when his mother refers to his penis as mini Sesshomaru. It cracked me up.

I have another comment but I will PM that to you later. Looking forward to more chapters. Great job!


Victoria (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

When I read the summary, I was already hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter and how far this story will go and the development of the characters. Keep up the good work.


Violla (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

Bellissima storia 


zodiak023 (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

awe I like this story very original plot I like the ending to chapter two really good and very creative with the whole mating d pregnancy thing. I love it hurry up with the next chappies don't leave me hanging like this.


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