LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Sat 14 Jan 2017

This story is very interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!


snow (Chapter 3) - Sat 14 Jan 2017

interesting story! i will add it to my favorites and keep following the progress.


Alashia (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Jan 2017

Can't wait to see what happens when they meet. Great story so far! Hope you will update soon.


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Jan 2017

Very nice chapter, well written and humerous too. 

Some men are so dense and it seems Touga and Sessho fall in that catagory somewhat. They should have started at the bottom first; it probably could have saved them some time searrching. I usually start at the bottom first myself because it always seems to work for me most of the time....that's how my luck runs....lol.  I was surprised that InuKimi did not sense that Kagome's babies were demonic when she touched her stomach or maybe felt a familiar aura coming from her. Well, at least they finally found the right person. Now that she is four and half months, hopefully Sessho gets to find and aquaints himself with her before the babies are born at least.

I hope you are feeling much better than before and maybe get some much needed sleep as time goes by. I just got home from having an Endoscopy procedure a half an hour ago and the first thing I did was get on my computer to check for your story and was excited when it was posted...yaaah!

Looking forward to the next chapter. Excellent job!


Izzy (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

Very interesting!


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

This story is coming together nicely. Sessho seems to be finally getting it together. I loved the part with the conversation he has with his parents, especially when his mother refers to his penis as mini Sesshomaru. It cracked me up.

I have another comment but I will PM that to you later. Looking forward to more chapters. Great job!


Victoria (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

When I read the summary, I was already hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter and how far this story will go and the development of the characters. Keep up the good work.


Violla (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

Bellissima storia 


zodiak023 (Chapter 2) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

awe I like this story very original plot I like the ending to chapter two really good and very creative with the whole mating d pregnancy thing. I love it hurry up with the next chappies don't leave me hanging like this.


Diane Peter (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Jan 2017

Kinda hard to read, has formatting errors or something. The sentences go off the edge of the page & some of the paragraphs have line spaces in the middle of the sentences. I just copy/pasted it into a txt doc so I'll see if I can actually read it now.


Susi8 (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Jan 2017

I like your story so far, the plot sounds interesting. :D


Samara (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Jan 2017

Okay. I am  definitely interested in this story.  But... I had to copy and paste it into a word processor from the "print view" just to read it.  The lines cut off on the normal view and the print view font was teeny.  I read on my cell.  I don't often run into this problem, so I am thinking it had something to do with the editing on your end.

 

Good luck.  I hope to see the next chapter soon!


Toni (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Jan 2017

looking forward to more chapters 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Sun 08 Jan 2017

I like the concept of the story. Sessho is so OOC but I kind of like him. He seems slightly dense.

The only thing I see wrong is the formatting. Maybe it's your new computer. My computer is faulty too. The space bar is fucked up. I have to keep going back and separating the words that did not move when I hit the space bar, it makes my words look like one long word. It is a pain in my ass. lol

Question: If Sessho decides to keep going to the sperm bank for quick cash and since Kagome is the first woman to get impregnated, does this mean that any other woman that comes along and picks his sperm it won't take because he already has pups on the way? And also does the crescent moon on Kagome's belly mean that she and Sessho are automatically mated? Just wondering!

I look forward to more chapters of this story. Will you complete this one and not leave it incomplete like your other stories? My apologies if this sounds rude, it is not meant to be because I know you have a RL. Nice job!

 


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