Welcome back and great start! Looking forward to seeing where this goes! I hope you also plan to update some of your older stories :)
I really enjoyed reading these first two chapters. It has faacinated and intrigued me. The story is very beautifully written. I hope you update as often as you can and welcome back. I look forward to future chapters. I love how you are portraying Kagome's character by the way. A strong  self efficient and confident woman. I am looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds and the direction you are taking it to. Excellent piece of writing. 
      
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