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RestlessTemptationz (Chapter 5) - Tue 31 May 2016

Oh my. This is quite the story. I'll be waiting for an update! 


Elspeth (Chapter 5) - Sun 29 May 2016

Wow. Blown away. 


criticat (Chapter 1) - Mon 23 May 2016

I like it :). It's descriptive, but not overly, and well-written.


Katrina Kee (Chapter 4) - Mon 23 May 2016

Wow! Kagome seems so confused at just about everything! I wonder what happened between her and Inuyasha? He seems to be the guy that if sees no value in something, then it isn't worth either his time nor anyone elses' time. He also seems to be of the mind that his opinion is the only opinion. Therefore Kagome's values and opinions mean very little to him. Now, why, I ask, does she still want to be around that kind of degrading influence? Such negativity? While I am sure that she sees more of Inuyasha that one could guess at, there are only so many layers to an onion, so to speak, before you peel them all away and then there is nothing left to the onion. I am glad that she isn't with him anymore but he really does need to grow up some.

As to why Sesshomaru does what he does.......he is a bit curious about Kagome and, I think, is trying to get her to see the value she holds within herself. The value that Inuyasha has all but stamped out of her. She sure does need a shot of self confidence and moral. I also hope that she is very good at digitally messing with photographs like her boss thinks cause someone will walk into her office someday and want her to do something for them that she has supposedly already done in a published photo and Kagome won't be able to recreat it otherwise. How awful won't that be?

Can't wait for more chapters! Who put up the barrier around the village? Was it Kagome? Now that's what I call powerful! Inuyasha is an idiot if he tries to downplay that or belittle that by saying that Kikyo could have put up a barrier around all of Japan if she wanted. Yeah right! If Kikyo could have done it, then why didn't she do just that instead of patrolling the village and becoming a target for lowly demons all of the time. Not too smart if you ask me! Work smarter, not harder is my motto!!!


Miss C (Chapter 4) - Sun 22 May 2016

I feel that the climax is building up!


roberta. (Chapter 4) - Sun 22 May 2016

Great update


SessQueen (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 May 2016

Interesting story.


roberta. (Chapter 2) - Thu 19 May 2016

Thanks for the update


roberta. (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 May 2016

Liked this chap hope to see more


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