Great chapters, keep it coming. 
      
Eva (Chapter 13) -  Sat 30 Apr 2016 
She is certainly not weak or useless. 
      
That took me a second read to understand that Sess burned his hand on Kagome's barrier. 
      
Good, keep it coming. 
      
Ha funny 
      
Eva (Chapter 11) -  Wed 27 Apr 2016 
So business as usual between our favorite half brothers. It seems that Inuyasha doesn't want to share his toys, even if he doesn't wish to play with them. 
      
Interesting 
      
Eva (Chapter 9) -  Thu 21 Apr 2016 
You have piqued my interest. I like what you have so far, although the title is quite ominous. I love Rin's role.  
      
Wow harsh sesshy 
      
Leaora (Chapter 6) -  Sat 09 Apr 2016 
Oh, me likey!  
      
Good story like to see where you take it. 
      
Rhonda (Chapter 1) -  Sat 09 Apr 2016 
  LOVE a OC Sesshoumaru. It makes the "Fall" that much sweeter.  
Looking forward to more. 
      
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