Reviews for The Watcher by Michi

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LoveAndFaith (Chapter 6) - Wed 11 May 2016

Great, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

There are Angels
God put on this Earth
Who care for us and guide us.
You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us.
They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears.
They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile.
They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child.
God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own.
She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown.
She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her
Mother


Fyrelilly (Chapter 6) - Wed 11 May 2016

This is such a great story!  It was a pleasure to read.  I can't wait to learn Kagome 's secrets!   Where did you move to in Canada?  I just moved from Toronto to B.C. 


Lauren (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 May 2016

Great update! This story is very interesting and I'm excited about the mystery that'll unravel within it.


Nagi's fighting style was interesting, but his past explains so much. What a horrifying childhood. I almost don't blame the dragon for killing the heirs if that's what saved him from experiencing more torture. Maybe you'll change the relationship between the inu and the ryu so Sessho and Nagi become closer and Ryukostusei isn't the obstacle he became? You did change everyone else... Speaking of change~ What are they doing about Naraku? If Miroku has the wind tunnel, it must mean that Kikyo and Onigumo existed, and that Naraku currently exists. How else would he get the wind tunnel? ...But doesn't Kagome have the jewel and that's what makes her so valuable to her "master"/torturer??  


I'm so glad that that lion got his. What a douche... And shame on Kagome and the other lords for being disappointed in Sesshomaru for the way he met out the punishment. They know Sesshomaru isn't anything like that creepy bastard Kirai (please kill that grey-haired weirdo soon). He wouldn't harm someone without provocation. :/


That final scene was interesting, to say the least. Was that a glimpse at the past? At what demons and miko had come from? What significance is it to the Falcons and to Sesshomaru and Kagome, though? Are those humans related to the Watchers? To this "master" everyone fears?


So many questions! I'm dying to find out what the conclusion of that final scene will be, what's next for the family, and about what the celebration's end will look like/mean for our puppy and his favorite bedmate. 


~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl 


Lauren (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 May 2016

Great update! This story is very interesting and I'm excited about the mystery that'll unravel within it.


Nagi's fighting style was interesting, but his past explains so much. What a horrifying childhood. I almost don't blame the dragon for killing the heirs if that's what saved him from experiencing more torture. Maybe you'll change the relationship between the inu and the ryu so Sessho and Nagi become closer and Ryukostusei isn't the obstacle he became? You did change everyone else... Speaking of change~ What are they doing about Naraku? If Miroku hasthe wind tunnel, it must mean that Kikyo and Onigumo existed, and that Naraku currently exists. How else would he get the wind tunnel? But doesn' Kagome have the jewel and that's what makes her so valuable to her "master"/torturer?? Hmm... 


I'm so glad that that lion got his. What a douche... And shame on Kagome and the other lords for being disappointed in Sesshomar for the way he met out the punishment. They know Sesshomaru isn't anything like that creepy bastard Kirai. He wouldn't harm someone without provocation. :/


That final scene was interesting, to say the least. Was that a glimpse at the past? At what demons and miko had come from? What significance is it to the Falcons and to Sesshomaru and Kagome, though? Are those humans related to the Watchers? To this "master" everyone fears?


So many questions! I'm dying to find out what the conclusion of that scene will be, what's next, and about what the celebration's end will look like/mean for our puppy and his favorite bedmate. 


~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl 


The Letter Keeper (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 May 2016

Ugh! I have so many questions! I want to know the secrets and this whole waiting thing is driving me insane! I'm kind of confused about Kagome's reaction o Sesshomaru's treatment of the lion. She has seen him grow and knows him probably better than most? I understand she's tender hearted but it kind of caught me off guard when she was disappointed. She knows about demon culture better than most.

I didn't not enjoy it but the secene seemed odd to me. Other than that though I'm throughly enjoying your story and I cant't wait for the next update! Well done!


Leaora (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 May 2016

Thanks for updating! I am sorry that you had to endure such horror, but at least it's over....for now...


KEdakumi (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 May 2016

The twists and turns in this story are great.  I can't wait to see what is revealed next. 


roberta. (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 May 2016

Interesting.


Minime (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 May 2016

Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter.


Mona (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 May 2016

Great update, I wish to read more soon.


Jennifer (Chapter 4) - Sun 01 May 2016

hahaha

A lion. Zing!


Usagi1323 (Chapter 5) - Sun 03 Apr 2016

Cant wait to see what happens next!!


Nilee1 (Chapter 5) - Tue 22 Mar 2016

This is a magnificent story. 


Nilee1 (Chapter 5) - Tue 22 Mar 2016

This is a magnificent story. 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 5) - Tue 22 Mar 2016

Awesome chapter. I liked that you gave a little more insight into Kagome's background. Just when the fighting was going good for Sess, the Watchers had to come to take his Kagome away which will probably leave him distracted when he still has to fight the lions. Maybe  his anger will give him that extra something to be able to overcome the lions because of the loss of Kagome's presence. Excellent writing and  fascinating storyline. I sure would like to find out more about Kagome's clan and what their purpose is and their connection to her. Update soon. What a cliffy.


xDori (Chapter 5) - Mon 21 Mar 2016

Your story is going great so far. I like the pace of it too. Keep 'em coming! :)


roberta. (Chapter 5) - Mon 21 Mar 2016

Great chap last line had me confused when did sesshy ever meet the watchers?


Lady Ashe (Chapter 5) - Mon 21 Mar 2016

Noooooo!!!!! Why do they have to come back now?! Fluffy is going to kill them. Maybe not right now but he will. At least I hope he does...


Gene (Chapter 1) - Mon 21 Mar 2016

This chapter was gone in one breath and ended with a cliffhanger. Damn)

 


Blommie8 (Chapter 5) - Mon 21 Mar 2016

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