Okay, this is soooooo... How should I put it? Heartbreaking is not quite right. It’s bittersweet-guilt induced story of sess, very uncommon side of him. I need more of this! Thank you. 

I was reading this on the bus, so I couldn't cry. Tragic but very well written. 

Sad do very sad but so well written I just love it

So sad!!!!

Well, I'm crying. I've read a different variation of this story but this one really got to me lol.

Great story!! Even though I don't necessarily like angsty ending (makes me feel some kind of way) the ending was perfect. 

What a coincidence, I just read the post on fb and after a few minutes saw this story on facebook.Amazing adaptation of the story...

This is so sad. . I cry for this. . 

Wow that was dark. Kerma is a b####ch.

Reading this story while listening to sad Enrique Iglesias songs was a terrible blow to my heart. I admit it, I cried. Depressing but beautifully written. I didn't expect that ending though. Again, this is a well written and highly emotional story. Thank you.

I had read this story on FB also. I love your adaption of it. It was so sad and emotional. Everyone who reads this needs a box of tissues.

Wonderful  work so emotional  I also read it in the Internet the story it  was  heart breaking  wonderful  job 

NO NO NO NOT MY KAGOMEEEEEEEEEEE!!! I'm writing this review after I washed my face of all the tears n mucus. I wanted Sesshomaru to suffer but not at the price of my dear Kagome uwaaaaa

Beautifully written, with just one chapter u have done what many can't do. Though I'm sad right now, this creation is undoubtedly amazing. We'll be looking forward to your future works dear~

I ever read that story in internet, too. And yeah, I cried that time and JUST cried now. What a jerk the husband was! 

But I do understand. People only will understand something precious when they lose it.

Pretty developed story and beautiful words you chose.

Thanks for making such awesome one-shot.

So sad. I've read this story on Facebook too but only the original. Loved your take on it though. Very beautiful but so sad. 

omg... T-T.... cryinggggg soo sad but beautiful. 

hoping that any married can read and learn from this story

Omg.... this really made me cry. Great adaptation, it's unbelievably amazing. Thank you for sharing 

Every time I read this story it makes me so emotional. 

this has got to be the shortest, simplest and most heart wrenching story i've read. with just one chapter you got me bawling my eyes out in a cafe reading this! TAT