Miladyknight (Chapter 1) - Thu 16 Feb 2017

???? More please. ????

Deana (Chapter 3) - Wed 15 Feb 2017

Very good story! Can't wait for next update.

Toni (Chapter 3) - Wed 15 Feb 2017

great story  looking forward to the next chapter 

allison (Chapter 2) - Sun 29 May 2016

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this chapter and can't wait for the next one. The idea behind this story is fantastic, I love how kagome has grown so far in the story. 


Mona (Chapter 2) - Sat 28 May 2016

They should seperate from Inuyasha, after what he said about their 'sister' and the 'mother' to Shippo.  Maybe Kouga or even Sesshoumaru stumbles upon them and they make an alliance to travel together to defeat Naruka and along the way look for Kagome.

allison (Chapter 1) - Thu 04 Feb 2016

I have really enjoyed this story so far I hope you continue.

Zeelian (Chapter 1) - Sat 23 Jan 2016

Needs to be proofread/beta checked.

For instance,
"I dough I will find…"
"dough" is what you make bread & pizza from, "doubt" is the word you are looking for. 

"it seemed the young women may have had lessons in the field before her memory loss"
Woman, not women.

"vial hanyo"
"vial" is a small flask/container that is used to hold potions, perfumes & such, "Vile" = horrible, disgusting

Mona (Chapter 1) - Sat 23 Jan 2016

Great story, looking forward to reading more soon.

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