Reviews for Wither by Serena530

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Ree-san (Chapter 4) - Thu 19 May 2016

So happy to see the update. Really enjoying the development and plot. Looking forward to the next update! 


Drianax (Chapter 4) - Thu 19 May 2016

Love this story!  You must update quickly.  I especially love how you are portraying Sessoumaru's beast. . .as a somewhat thinking being rather than the typical "We like; must have" mentality so many fics have.  Keep it up, and update soon!


MythMagykFae (Chapter 4) - Thu 19 May 2016

Yay Kagome! Nice chapter, I like the way you had Sesshomaru ease her into his demonic side, and her total unfazed and unafraid reactions!


klomystr (Chapter 3) - Thu 18 Feb 2016

Interesting start! I'm curious if Kagome's condition is purely psychological or partly due to her being denied use of her spiritual powers. Either way, it's a good start to your story and I look forward to seeing where you go with Kagome's recovery.


Eva (Chapter 3) - Mon 15 Feb 2016

I really like this idea. I'm sure most of us have at one point or another thought we might die of boredom. Inuyasha's dubious intentions and Miroku and Sango not understanding, it makes sense to me. Kaede's reaction makes sense as well. I want to see how her recovery and then training goes.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 3) - Mon 15 Feb 2016

Wow, great chapter!


Saiya (Chapter 3) - Mon 15 Feb 2016

Aawww!!! Sesshomaru YOU FRICKIN ROCK>


Mona (Chapter 3) - Mon 15 Feb 2016

Awesome!!!


JoLynn (Chapter 3) - Mon 15 Feb 2016

OH damn!  That last line though.  That was strangely intense!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 3) - Sun 14 Feb 2016

Good, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day! 


Ree-san (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Feb 2016

Wow! Very interesting! Such profound depression can have devastating effects on the mind and body. Inuyasha is an absolute ass! I really hope she sticks to it and doesn't go back to her old pack. It would be hard to see her even as casual friends with them. Their indifference and refusal to consider what she said and wanted takes away all trust. I can't wait to see the next update! I really hope that Sesshoumaru beats the ever loving shit out of Inuyasha. 


KEdakumi (Chapter 3) - Sun 14 Feb 2016

Good chapter.  Love how he brought her back.  Wonder what the others thought of this. 


KEdakumi (Chapter 2) - Fri 05 Feb 2016

What wonderful chapters.  She's fallen into a major depression.  Did you know that the heart can actually break?  The heart strings around the heart snap with stress (or sadness)

I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru does with this info and if he can get her away from them quickly.

 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 2) - Wed 03 Feb 2016

This story has really peaked my interest. I think it is nicely written and the formatting is good. I would like to see this story continued, please update again soon. You are doing a great job on this story just like yoour others.

 

As for Sesshomaru, he should take her away from there immediately regardless of what the others would say or think. I think she would flourish under his care and she will have a purpose again. He needs her for Rin's sake and vice versa.


Corina (Chapter 1) - Tue 02 Feb 2016

Interesante como desarrollo la historia!

Gracias!  Esperando la proxima entrega !


LibraCourt (Chapter 2) - Mon 01 Feb 2016

Keep writing and keep updating. I'm interested and that takes a lot to do as I am picky on the stories I read, but now that it seems the journal entries are done I'm curious as to how it will go now. I'll review again when I've read a few more chapters.


Mona (Chapter 2) - Mon 01 Feb 2016

Amazing!!!  Please update again soon, this is a fantastic fanfic.


MythMagykFae (Chapter 2) - Mon 01 Feb 2016

Oh wow, this story is heart breaking! It is also beautifully written, I can't wait for more!


Sandra (Chapter 1) - Sat 23 Jan 2016

You got my atention!

It seems a really good story hope you update soon!


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