Reviews for Eternally Yours by Dollchan

Cheyanna (Chapter 7) - Wed 07 Feb 2018

I can't wait to read more!!!!! I really like this story!!!:)


roberta. (Chapter 6) - Sat 23 Jan 2016

Thanks for the update


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 5) - Wed 20 Jan 2016

Great story, keep it coming. Happy New Year!

 


roberta. (Chapter 5) - Wed 20 Jan 2016

Just found your story and read it through. Such good story telling I was glued to it. Really enjoy your style of writing looking forward to seeing next chap.


Mona (Chapter 4) - Wed 13 Jan 2016

Great update!!! I am looking forward to possibly reading about Kagome finally cursing out Satori for her overbearing and stubborn nature.


Blommie8 (Chapter 3) - Wed 13 Jan 2016

Saiya (Chapter 3) - Mon 11 Jan 2016

Hahahahaha


Mona (Chapter 3) - Sun 10 Jan 2016

Awesome update, can't wait to read the many chapters to come.


None (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

Good, but you're missing quite a bit of punctuation, mainly commas after speechmarks, apostraphes for shortened words like 'wouldn't', and fullstops signalling the end of some sentences.

A few spelling mistakes too like -Fortunatly which should be 'fortunately'.

Other than that it's a good start.

 

I like it.

 

 


Mutnodjmet (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Jan 2016

You are off to a good start. I am liking this story already. I sometimes like sappy and fluffy S/K stories. Well done and hope to see future updates soon.

 

 


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