That was a fabulous read. There's some technical errors and grammatical things here and there, But. Your story telling is absolutely fantastic. You have set up a beautiful and organic-feeling tension between Kagome and Sesshoumaru that left my heart beating like crazy!! Please update again soon. I am completely enamored of your story and was so disappointed to see this read your only one, and without any more chapters yet! Please hurry and give me more!!
All in all a good story.
Saiya (Chapter 4) - Wed 23 Dec 2015
That was Scary and Cool. Sesshomaru to save the day.
Saiya (Chapter 3) - Sat 12 Dec 2015
That was Awsome Can't wait for the next chapter.
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Sat 05 Dec 2015
That was Awsome.But what about her blood is different then a nomal female Human.
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Fri 04 Dec 2015
That was Cute and Funny!
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