Ha! Take that brats!  I bet now that they saw her do something cool they'll be all nice and want to be her friend again. Then again seeing her using a bow might make them scared of her. I can't wait to see what direction you go with this!

Ohhhh no! You don't get to be friends again!!

Sesshoumaru is already pretty hung up on her. I can see why he'd be mad that she forgets him. I'm also torn about jumping to milestones. I wanna get there, but I also wanna see their relationship build. Hmm.... Either way I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Awe!  This is just too cute!

Kagome's fathet is awesome with his papa-bear deal.

Awwwww! I can't wait for more, i love seeing his thoughts on her!

Awww i just love how much he cherishes her!! 

Aw sweet chap please update soon

Very nice reflective bit of fluff! Thanks for the update.

Awwwww

whoaa, am I hear 10 chapter in row?! is it trueeeeee??!!!!! It's really okay, no ,it's soo fucking amazing! I can't wait it!

Sess really got soft spot there. and, that father-daughter moment changed all of my feeling (impression) towards her father. Love al the fluff moment you wrote here. Can't wait fo he next chapter!

thank you for your hardwork 

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW to cute. nice way to start out the day reading this adorable little chapter.

Awe soooo sweet. I'm going to die of fluffiness one day, not today though, so keep it coming.

Can't wait for more! Shooting a bow is so fun, but can be hard... I'm looking forward to Sess' reaction to her new skills!

It's good that Kagome and Shu are getting quality time in.

I love that you and others have tried archery. Not your run of the mill sport. Very cool! Very nice chapter, more bonding with dad. Thanks so much 

Loving it

I love this story.

I recently found this little gem and just have to take a moment to let you know just how sweet this fic is. You may not be a great writer right now, but you will be if you keep practicing the way you are.  (in reference to the critisism reviewers give you. It's good that you don't take it badly)

You are a good storyteller and that is always the most important part of writing. You have given our beloved couple many very good storylines and this one in particular has kept a smile on my face and a warmth in my heart as Sesshoumaru befriends this little girl from the future and learns why the Kami have allowed her to travel time.

Their time together gives us a different side of our youkai lord. At least right now in this time period he's not as cold as ice, though he's still as arrogant as ever. LOL, I love it!

I have read others simuliar to this plotline and yours has it's own special twist to it. You are doing a fine job. Listen to the Grammar Nazi out there as my daughter has actually befriended several in her genre and has learned so much from them. No one expects you to be perfect, at least not here. Dokuga members are very loving and forgiving and for that I'm grateful because it gives new writers a place to feel welcomed as well as feel safe to post their first fics as they learn their craft.

Keep writing, my friend, you do have talent.

JEN

Oh Daddy is teaching Kagome how to shoot a bow! How sweet!!!!!

Yes please????