Thanks for your review! Don't worry about it - I welcome constructive criticism. I was actually kind of worried people would think it's anti-climatic, but it's not really, because it's not the climax at all It's just a little...introduction, shall we say? A set up.

Mind you, I will say this, this little adventure they're on is not the main conflict. In fact, Yamiko is not even the main villain. All will reveal itself in due time

And in the future, don't hesitate to tell me your honest opinion! I won't be offended or insulted and I'll try my best to respond accordingly! Thank you for all your support so far!