Sessakag
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Created On: 07/30/2016 04:35:29
Yay! Another review!  I'm still debating which characters to bring in, Naraku isn't totally out of the question, that much I'll say. Any questions you have, shoot them my way! I'll answer them the best I can without spoiling the story  Hope to hear from you again!  Feedback from Jenna: Do you plain on letting the read in on Kagome's secret or will they find out when Sesshomaru does? Will Kagome have her miko powers? Will Sota play a big part in the story? Do you plain on incorporating the planet and it's culture into the story more?
So far you have done a smooth job at giving the reader information without overloading them with it. Which, in my opinion, is very important in a sci fi story.
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Sessakag
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Created On: 07/28/2016 04:10:22
Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Feedback from Jenna: Thank you!!! Just got done reading the new chapter, you did amazing ^^
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