Love it, love it, love it, love it!!!!!! happy endings make me happy. Wonderful job on an amazing story.
I absolutely love the way you've portrayed Naraku's character in this fanfic; it's so true to his personality in the canon story that I was in awe and during his conversations with Kagome in Ch. 1 I was hearing Paul Dobson's Naraku voice saying the lines in my head, that's how well you've developed his character here in my opinion. But, why kill him off so soon? I was rather looking forward to reading through such a well-written romance story between Kagome and Naraku, and not simply another Sesshomaru/Kagome one that frankly I've become rather bored of reading. Given their conversations in Ch. 1, I feel like there was quite a bit of potential for the aforementioned relationship to strengthen due to the hints you dropped about Kagome beginning to understand Naraku's mannerisms and how Naraku was trying to be nice to her in the only way he knew how. Albeit as you described, given how evil Naraku is it would have taken a while for Kagome to begin to trust Naraku, but I feel like, over time, if Kagome would've been in Naraku's prescence and continued interacting with him, Naraku's soul would've started to sprout feelings of compassion and softness similar to how saving Rin changed Sesshomaru. I just think that you could've given the relationship between Naraku and Kagome more of an opportunity to materialize, because in my opinion it would've been very intruiging to read just how much Kagome would've been able to "soften Naraku up" if you get what I'm saying.
AAWWW!! I love how this turned out.
You write the most romantic Sesshoumaru I believe I have ever read.
Great job Amber. Thank you for another wonderful story!
I am S0o0o0o0o0o0o0o giggly right now this is so freaking awesome! and Kougaas his girl pup's mate hahahahahahaha NICE!
<- is so happy!
Jsep (Chapter 6) - Sun 20 Nov 2011
Best. Story. EVER!
TKE (Chapter 6) - Sun 20 Nov 2011
Awesome!!!! I love how it turned out...very creative solution to the protection of the western lands....sooooo happy!!
Tammy (Chapter 6) - Sun 20 Nov 2011
wow that was just a wide ranged from gore to fluff. I was in serious need of some fluff. I loved it!
Lumi (Chapter 6) - Sat 19 Nov 2011
Fantastic.
Saraniya (Chapter 6) - Sat 19 Nov 2011
Awesome chapter and I loved the ending! I'm procrastinating by reading instead of doing my paper due in about less then ten days! Chapter was so worth it though!
OMG! I loved it! as I do all your stories!! I hope your files hold many fabulous ideas! I so hope to enjoy your stories for a very long time to come!
0_o dare I belive?!
can it truly be?!
WHY YES, yes it IS another update... and what another fantastic update!! As expected of the fabulous Kanna37.
About time miss lady, a woman was getting itchy around here. *Glomps* i thought you never come back and save me from my withdrawl symptoms. Now of course I need more right after that one. LOL
Poor Sesshoumaru, isnt it always like that though...fight so hard to get what you truly desire and have to fight even harder to keep it?
Take your time updating...*sarcasm by the way* -hint hint wink wink- LOL
D.O.D
Unibbie (Chapter 5) - Fri 19 Aug 2011
ah this is really suspencefull its got me waiting anchesly for the next chapter to see if kagome and their pup survies :O
Unibbie (Chapter 5) - Wed 17 Aug 2011
I really Loved this it was enchanting and i could really emagin every line of your story i cant wait for the next one to come out. I really wont to know if the pup survives and what kind of turture that the servent get.;)
Thanks for the update! Sigh...why does everyone have to hate on the humans...
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